The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people

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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.

A nation can never be termed as a great nation depending on the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. How come can we just characterize greatness by the achievements only there are various factors to outnumber the greatness of the nation? Thus it truly depends on the general welfare of its people.
There is no idea about the track the rulers followed to achieve something. Did they achieve what they have in evil or good way? It is too difficult to answer to this without knowing the history or categorizing it on our own. They can also be characterized as good or bad rulers. Considering the facts with the number of great rulers, artists or scientists be present in a nation but what about the other people of the country, they can be good as well as bad also.

Considering the youth of the nation some of the youth may be into developing something great, doing something for the betterment of the society, On the other hand, there may be also a youth who might be involved in some outrageous or bad activities. On the other end if one part of the person always keeps on achieving something but the other people do not come up to congratulate him or laud him then what’s the point of that different achievements as no one cares for the general welfare and all of them and just keeps track of their achievements and do not laud their fellow colleagues.

Talking about the artists and the scientists. In today’s developing era as much as the good things are happening with that also the bad things have also come up in the people’s mind. Not all achievements can be considered as to be achieved by great means and for other’s wellbeing. Some are also a part of being of someone’s selfishness. So also keeping this scenario in mind we cannot eschew the number of achievement’s made by the people of the state but to consider them as the surest indicator as it being a great nation is not a valid point.

In the valid point of view, greatness can be indicated just by the general welfare of the people as the true point is the nation where people live together with unity, people ought to help other people also, there where is peace and no war in between themselves. The nation where rich not always aim at being rich and helps various other people in the need of money. The nation where the government also rather then just keep on making money, helps the homeless comes up with various schemes for different people. These all flavors present in a nation make a nation great.

Hence it is rather unjust to consider a nation to be great just depending on the achievement factor of the great achievements of rulers, artists, or scientists. It is completely dependent on the general welfare of the people. So the nation which is completely balanced on its end can be considered as a truly great nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
... outnumber the greatness of the nation? Thus it truly depends on the general welfare...
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Suggestion: colleagues
...heir achievements and do not laud their fellow colleagues. Talking about the artists and the s...
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Suggestion: than
...nation where the government also rather then just keep on making money, helps the ho...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ent in a nation make a nation great. Hence it is rather unjust to consider a natio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, talking about, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6185770751 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65296386744 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391304347826 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7860622966 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.227272727 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329730950163 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109390646616 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772677114527 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195841107914 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801486731389 0.0667264976115 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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