Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.

As per the given issue, it is merely a fact that nations should adhere the strict laws in order to preserve
any of the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state. Many of the wild animals like the white tiger,
and bears can be seen are on the verge of extinction even though some of the previous forest animals
have become extinct also. Seeing about the general data of the number of wild animals ratio in the
forest it can be said that day by day, years to years it’s always been a declining curve never have been
an uprising curve. Marking out the various factors affecting it are mentioned below.

Firstly, it has become very popular among humans to go into the forest for the sightseeing of
animals, which they consider as fun among themselves. When seeing the other perspective as
though their visit to forest has increased it clearly is seen that the pollution and other activities
have affected the life of the animals living there. People not only disturb them by going there but
they do also make sounds which affect the animals, they do also pollute the animal's home by
throwing the waste items like plastic, tissues, or any other type of garbage that any animal might
wander there and may consider eating it and that hazardous substances are also very dangerous for
their health.

Secondly, some of people go into the forest just for hunting. There has always been a food cycle
which animals have followed from plant to herbivorous to carnivorous and then the last
omnivorous which are dependent on one another as their food. Deer hunting has been a great trend
among people as they visit the forests during daytime and hunt the deer down. This clearly affects the
animal food cycle as they do hunt the deers which for example consider the food for lions or tigers or
any wild animals as those carnivorous animals are clearly dependent on the hunting of these animals
they would also die on the verge of starvation. Cutting of trees into the forests also affect the animals
living in the forest.

Considering it as the laws are passed throughout the nation against these harmful activities for the
animals there could be a possibility that the wildlife can still be preserved in it’s natural state. To
preserve them the laws like making the wilderness areas a silent zone just like no horn no disturbance
zone it would contribute a lot. Practicing strict action against those who harm any of that area by
throwing rubbish on the roads should be implemented as there will be a rapid decline in these
activities. Making hunting a punishable act would also help preserve the remaining wilderness.
These all laws would be a major factor in protecting the wilderness and protect them from the verge of
extinction.

These all problems affecting the wildlife should be considered so hence to prevent many of these
factors affecting the extinction of wild animals should be taken care of and strict laws should be
passed to preserve them. These laws should be passed by nation a serious note as soon as possible
to protect the wilderness.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... on the verge of extinction even though some of the previous forest animals have become ex...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ous forest animals have become extinct also. Seeing about the general data of the n...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... the general data of the number of wild animals ratio in the forest it can be said tha...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ng out the various factors affecting it are mentioned below. Firstly, it has bec...
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Line 17, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ngerous for their health. Secondly, some of people go into the forest just for hunting. Th...
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Line 27, column 79, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'in its natural'?
Suggestion: in its natural
...hat the wildlife can still be preserved in it’s natural state. To preserve them the laws like ...
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Line 27, column 82, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
... the wildlife can still be preserved in it’s natural state. To preserve them the la...
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Line 37, column 26, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aws should be passed to preserve them. These laws should be passed by nation a serio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89622641509 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38415395963 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437735849057 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8043330725 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.578947368 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8947368421 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.97078651685 644% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25508927613 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910125143873 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136967696245 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632209259367 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930734249611 0.0667264976115 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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