The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The nation is called great nation on the basis of major three categories; economic development, social and cultural development and educational development. In every nation governments show great researches, major artistic pieces and rulers own work but these are not sufficient indicator for great nation. The general welfare of its people on the basis of economic, social, culture and educational level are the surest indicator of a great nation.
Moreover in India there are so many stories about great dynasties’ which focuses on the welfare of the locals and did hard work for welfare. In India the welfare of the country is basic dharma of the ruler such as the great Ashoka developed his city and connect all villages with city for the people and established true justices for everyone. Ashoka’s emperor is famous because of his work for welfare of people not for the ruler, artist or scientist.
Additionally, when everyone has fulfilled their basic needs then the nation will be great. Everyone has talent and if they get busy to fulfill their basic needs than they can’t think about innovation. The scientist and artist do their duties but the new idea comes from local people. For example, In India an engineer started his own startup to produce t-shirts with live status; the efforts of general people make the country great.
Furthermore, the little droplets collects can full the sea as well as the welfare of the local population of any country enhances the greatness of the country. The country spends too much on scientist, and artist to equipped the country with latest trend but it is not sufficient the local people should be have enough potential to handle new technology and fashion. For example, the government launched application for booking of tickets but the local public is not literate then the technology will not be used properly.
Conclusively, the great nation is represented by the local public not on the basis of the achievements of its rulers, artists or scientist. The achievements are secondary for nation's fame but the primary need is welfare of the local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10601719198 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70928383187 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507163323782 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7371079203 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.8 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187350570466 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767721504958 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708465801665 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119886119855 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777755446222 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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