The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statemen

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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Great nation can be defined as the nation whoes social, economic and political development is at its peak and is continuesly developing. Although, general welfare of the people is an important thing while analysing the greatness of any nation, in my view the achievements of its rulers, scientists and artists would be more efficiantly predict the greatness of any nation in all the aspects of gratness.

Achievements are in the forms of Awards or various prestigious prices are the indicators of excellence. If the rulers of any perticular nation are recieving such honors, that means the political development of that nation is very good and it is in good hands. Barak Obama recieved a Nobel price of peace, that was a clear indication that the country he was leading is in peace and ultimetly the people living in that country are in well being

Furthermore, If the artist or sportsperson receiving any kind of Award or winning the prestigious matches in olympic games or artists winning some great international competitions, we can say that the nation is supporting such art and sports so that the people living in that country can lead the nation. Arts and sports are the secondory things in life and without the general welfare of the people it is difficult to focous on the secondary things like arts.

In addition to this, It is also true that for any nation the scientific development plays a very important role in deciding its greatness. The scientific development is masured as the nations overall development, for example NASA a US space agency is the worlds best scientific agency and there fore every nation knows that the greatness of United States in the space science, And is appreciated by everyone. Simmilarly it is true for every branch of science and therefore, achievements in science can be a parameter to assess the greatness of the nation.

Ultimately, I can say that after understanding the examples above the achievements of the rulers, artists, and scientist of any nation could be a surest indicator. Because, success in all those things make a nation great and not just the general welfare. only achieving the general welfare can be a great thing for the nations citizens but achieving the greatness in all things listed above gives the prestige to the nation and its citizens in entire world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Nobel Prize' (reward)?
Suggestion: Nobel Prize
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: therefore
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, in my view, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96173469388 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83550020856 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.995459303 60.3974514979 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.083333333 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.21951772744 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204835522285 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907574936255 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488195478787 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124674790826 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659986137872 0.0667264976115 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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