The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Leaders in any fields whether it in government or industry or in any other field, are the people who lead that particular organisation. The success of a leader is measured as the how well that organisation is doing as compare to the other similar organisations and where is that organisation is standing. Although, it is true that the competition is involved in the leaders of similar organisation and to the some extent it is essential too, in my opinion it is the cooperative nature of the leader, which is more important in order to be a successful leader.

In government organisations or in government itself the cooperative leader is consider as a good leader. Nelson Mandela was the social reformer as well as he consider as one of the best leaders in the world not only because he competed with his fellow opponent and win but because he compete with the peace and always cooperated with good people.

As we know there are various industrialist like Narayan Murthi and Mark Zuckerberg who consider as the best leaders in the industry, again not only because they are very successful in the business but because they give substantial part of there profit to the society and which very good sign of any leader. This is only possible because all these people have coopertative sense in their mind and not always the competition helps.

In arts like music, dancing or painting, it is true that there is lot of competition involved but all we can say is any form of the art can be more excellent when the scholars of that art cooperate to the new comers. The cooperative sense is very essential in order to be a successful leader in such arts so that people who follow that leader feel very comfortable.

In conclusion, I can say that all the example cited above are support the idea that cooperative sense is very essential part in order to become a successful leader. Therefore, to prepare the young people for industry society should instill the sense of cooperation and not only the competition.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79369627507 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80380069679 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432664756447 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4882908964 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125388995491 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667549482657 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105709969985 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827775164379 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079746566251 0.0667264976115 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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