The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People are the true representative of a nation. The standard of living, per capita, and the satisfactory index of a common citizen are the pivotal role to decide whether the nation is developed or not. The prompt says that the great nation is represented by the achievement of the leaders, scientist, artist and common people have no role to play. I disagree with this due to the following reasons .
Firstly, the living conditions of the people are the paramount to any nation. India being the densely populated country has many great scientist and leaders. Mahatma Gandhi , a great freedom fighter was undoubtedly the top freedom fighter who's contributions to the freedom is immense. However, this merely doesn't define the greatness of the nation. The greatness of the nation in true essense lies in the living conditions of the citizens, how each individual contributes to the towards the betterment of mankind. These factors categorically has considerable influence on the economy of the nation, and to the upliftment of the society thereby representing the greatness of the nation.
Secondly, leaders as individuals cannot stand by themselves to achieve their goals. Its the people's support that is imperative. Abraham Lincoln, never would have fought successfully against the oppression of the black Americans in United states unless he was successful in persuading the large crowed. Ofcourse, the leaders goals should align the peoples intension to bolster their support.
Nevertheless, it is the individuals that makes the prominent impact to represent the nation. Scientist like Nicolos Tesla contribution to the society is huge and he being the front runner dictated the world with his inventions. Thomas eddison invented bulb which completely revolutionised the world, these inventions are not negligible and truly represents the prominence in the nation. But, they are not standalone to represent the whole nation. People as whole makes the nation, not the individual , who may be avant garde in their subjective fields.
In sum, individual contributions are always needed in the nation in the form of leaders, scientist, arts etc who can lead in their respective areas, however they should not be considered as the nation representatives. General public of the nation are the one who makes things possible and they; without their support nation will disintegrate to pieces
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36339522546 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94538937317 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543766578249 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4820372562 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223087547963 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741080415886 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491819119567 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119291132409 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447292126317 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.