Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Political leaders, are the imperative part of our governing system, as their policies and decision are directly affected the common man's life. The prompt tells us that ,few people recommend political leaders should follow public opinion and leaving their particular principle behind, while others opins to stick to their core principle policies. I do not completely agree that the politician should completely adhere to public opinion , rather they should augment the opinions to their core principles only if it serves majority of people to better serve the peoples mandate . Following are the reasons.
Firstly, public opinion doesn't represents the majority of the people in the governing area ,incorporating such a opinion in their policies would only benefit a handful of people. For instance the article from a local newspaper "First Post" OPed published an article saying to have a increased remittance on a loss of private property, however the core policies didn't have the clause to add such policies. Moreover, it turned out that the article was based on a survey which includes people who had special interest and would be benefited largely. Therefore , inheriting these policies will never serves myriad of people and eventually people are ought to vote out.
Secondly , the survey may also have a hidden agenda to take down the ruling party. Such ulterior motives however should not affect the public facilities , rules and regulations. The iconoclast entity with records public suggestions, proposed to have a heavy tax duty in a agricultural products. Although the government discarded the proposal, there was a massive protest against the policy that gave rise to disruption for a while.
However, there are instance where the opinion really addressed large public problems. Increase the pension of veterans , the decision which was implemented lately based on the public survey was much needed and the majority of the people admired the move. Although he policies uncovered the scheme , it was only possible due proper unbiased assessment of public survey.
In sum, I support the idea that the new policies can be added to the core principles of leaders provided they do not contradict the entire principles , proper assessment of new proposals should also be carried to see who are the beneficiaries and if there are any adverse effect of the new policies to larger group of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30729166667 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69474224681 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544270833333 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5022162772 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173600607723 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508631964191 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443356055882 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909804222589 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402333148531 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.