Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
The most import part in a student's life is his/her academics because, many successful people has good academics. Although, students academics is taught by teacher the performance of the student is not solely based on a teacher. I disagree with the prompt that student's academic performance should decide a teacher salary, and argue that teacher's salary should be based on his teaching efficiency.
Firstly, academic performance of the student not only depends on teacher but also, depends on various factors like concentration, hard work. For instance, if the student have not practiced what teacher taught in the class then it may effect his grades. Further, if the students do not pay attention to what teacher taught to them , then it may also effect their grades.
Secondly, Teacher is profession which is not only for money but also, for satisfaction . For example, the teacher who is willing to share his profound knowledge may not show interest in money. Further, teachers work for their job satisfaction and sharing of knowledge not for money.
Some people may argue that teacher works hard with dedication for money but, it is flawed in several ways. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that teachers work is dependent on money.
In conclusion, teacher's salary should be based on his behaviour, efficiency and other factors but not on the students performance as the student performance depends on several other factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: students'; student's
The most import part in a students life is his/her academics because, many...
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...y successful people has good academics. Although, students academics is taught by teache...
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...acher taught to them , then it may also effect their grades. Secondly, Teacher is p...
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...nly for money but also, for satisfaction . For example, the teacher who is willing...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
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...ciency and other factors but not on the students performance as the student performance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73764903197 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.227080289 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481552697491 0.243740707755 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194211185884 0.0831039109588 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180356929886 0.0758088955206 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281801609073 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203867413312 0.0667264976115 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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