There are two types of laws: just law and unjust law. Every individual in the society has to obey just law and even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust law.
Laws are the set of rules and regulation imposed by the nation upon each and every individual in order to maintain peace and harmony in the society. I therefore agree with the given statement that the society has to obey just laws and resist unjust laws. However, whether a law is just or unjust is sometimes controversial.
Law is believed to be designed for the welfare of humankind and is equally implemented to all citizens for progress. Any law is considered to be just if it is in favor of majority of the people (if not all). So, it is our responsibility to follow just law. For instance, if a nation implement the law to avoid the use of plastic bags as much as possible considering the dire environmental pollution and the negative consequences it results on human health, then it our social responsibility to obey such law. Similarly, considering severe road accidents and its dire consequences on human life, if the government imposes traffic law to ride below 50km/hr, compulsory fastening of seat belts, sober driving, and obeying traffic signals, then we should follow such law for human safety. Thus, if a law is really just and is in the favor of human well-being, then a society should follow just law.
However, laws are not only just, and history has witnessed several unjust laws that were imposed to general public by the oppressive government for their convenience, and we should strictly oppose such unjust laws as did by leaders in the past. For instance, Abraham Lincoln not only fought against once existing slavery in the United States, but also eliminated it from the history of humankind and brought equality. Similarly, Mahatma Gandhi led the entire Indian mass against oppressive British Imperialism and fought for the independence, against all odds, and succeeded in emancipating India from British imperialism. Further, Nelson Mandela strictly fought against once existing apartheid in South Africa and eventually brought racial quality. History reveals the way our great heroes resisted unjust laws and fought in favor of equality and independence of humankind. I therefore personally believe that we must defy unjust laws.
However, on the other hand, whether a law is just or unjust is sometimes controversial as the law is often guided by various factors such as, social and religious belief, degree of freedom and the level of understanding of the general people. For instance, in some of the society, such as in Islamic society, the law allowing polygamy is a just law, whereas the same is regarded to be unjust in some other society such as, Hindu. Similarly, in some of the broad and advanced society, the law allowing sex before marriage and abortion is just, and the society has no problem being a single parent, whereas the same act is a heinous crime in some of the conservative society. Thus, whether a law is just or unjust is also determined by the social, religious, and cultural notion as well as the level of understanding of the general people.
In conclusion, I agree that if a law is just then the society should follow such law. And if a law is unjust then, we should strictly defy such law. However, on the other hand we should not ignore the controversial nature of some laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...everal unjust laws that were imposed to general public by the oppressive government for their ...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of the general people. For instance, in some of the society, such as in Islamic society, th...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r society such as, Hindu. Similarly, in some of the broad and advanced society, the law all...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...reas the same act is a heinous crime in some of the conservative society. Thus, whether a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2689.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 549.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89799635701 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77119767686 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426229508197 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 864.0 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8421478753 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.227272727 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9545454545 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22727272727 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532067504047 0.243740707755 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211796569246 0.0831039109588 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137588013258 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361781156532 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823524356126 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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