Creating an appealing image has become more important in contemporary society than is the reality or truth behind that image.
Has creating an appealing image become more important in contemporary society, than is the reality or truth behind that image? The author contends so. I mostly agree that creating an appealing image become more central concern, at least where short-term business or political success is at stake. Nevertheless, I think that in longer term image is ultimately yields to substance fact.
The important role of image is particularly evident in the busines world. Consider, for example, today's automobile industry. American cars are becoming more essentially identical to competing Japanease cars in nearly every mechanical and structural respect, as well as in price. Thus to compete effectily autocompanies must know differentiate their products largely through image advertising., by conjuring up certain illusory benefits- such as machismo, status, sensibilit, or fun . The increasing focus on image is also evident in the book-publishing business. Publishers are relying more and more on the power of their brands rather than the content of their book. Today mass- market books are supplanted within a year with products essentially the same - except fresh faces., rifles, and other promotional angles. I find quiet telling the fact that today more and more book publishers are being acquired by large media companies. And the increasing image of importance is especifically evident in the music industry, where originality, artistic interpretation, and technical proficiency have yielded almost entierly to sex appeal.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Has creating an appealing image become m...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...tructural respect, as well as in price. Thus to compete effectily autocompanies must...
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Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...to compete effectily autocompanies must know differentiate their products largely th...
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... as machismo, status, sensibilit, or fun . The increasing focus on image is also e...
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Suggestion:
...elling the fact that today more and more book publishers are being acquired by la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, at least, for example, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64628820961 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05665720015 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.4932671777 136% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2435126631 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438192922956 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147065804209 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222691317948 0.0758088955206 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388431624769 0.150359130593 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190441269777 0.0667264976115 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Has creating an appealing image become m...
^^
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tructural respect, as well as in price. Thus to compete effectily autocompanies must...
^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...to compete effectily autocompanies must know differentiate their products largely th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... as machismo, status, sensibilit, or fun . The increasing focus on image is also e...
^^
Line 3, column 874, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elling the fact that today more and more book publishers are being acquired by la...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, at least, for example, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64628820961 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05665720015 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.4932671777 136% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2435126631 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438192922956 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147065804209 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222691317948 0.0758088955206 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388431624769 0.150359130593 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190441269777 0.0667264976115 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.