Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide because a tour guide know the infromation about the places and helps you to be aware of the infromation. However, I disagree with them and think that the best way to travel is not in a group led by a tour guide but without a tour guide for the following reasons.
First of all, the best way to travel is not in a group led by a tour guide because tour guide are expensive. If you travel in a group led by a tour guide, then it is possible that the cost of the trip might be high. As a result you may not travel for longer time period. For instance, when last year I had been to Annapurna Base Camp, I had paid about five thousand dollar for my fifteen day trip to a tour guide. If I was there without a tour guide, I could have used up that money in order to extend my journey. Perhaps, I could have able to elongate my fifteen days journey to twenty five journey from that five thousand dollar. If the journey was elongated, I definitely had more refreshing time. So, I think if you are not much reach then it is not the best way to travel in a group led by a tour guide.
Second, travelling in a group led by a tour guide is not the best way because they interfere unnecessarily. When you travel in a group led by a tour guide, it is more likely that you will be interfered in your action. If you interfered in your action then you may not have best travelling experience. For example, when I was in college, our group went for a tour to Muktinath Temple led by a tour guide. When my group were wanted to stay at Riverside Hotel, our tour guide did not agree and brought us into another hotel. we later knew that our tour guide used to get commission for bringing customer to another hotel. The food on the hotel where we stayed were so bad that even now when I remember, I often get angry for that tour guide. In contrast, if we were been there without a tour guide, we could have stayed where we wanted. Thus, I think travelling in a group led by a tour guide is not the best way.
Further, travelling in a group led by a tour guide is not the best way because of our privacy. I think privacy is very important factor of human being. Privacy is important in your personal relationship and drinking and smoking etc. If we travel with a tour guide, then we will not keep this kind of privacy. For supporting instance, when I was been to Pokhara with my friends few months back, we wanted to chill, had some fun. We wanted to smoke, and have kiss with our girlfreinds, however, we had a tour guide and who used to know our parents. As a result, we could not drink and smoke. Morevover, we could not able to even kiss our girlfriends. Nonetheless, if we were travelled without a tour guide, we could have all the fun. Hence, travellling in a group led by a tour guide is not the best way.
In conclusion, I personally think that travelling in a group led by a tour guide is not a best way to travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'journey' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'journeys'.
Suggestion: journeys
... my fifteen days journey to twenty five journey from that five thousand dollar. If the...
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Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nty five journey from that five thousand dollar. If the journey was elongated, I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uide, it is more likely that you will be interfered in your action. If you interf...
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Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...you will be interfered in your action. If you interfered in your action then you ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...gree and brought us into another hotel. we later knew that our tour guide used to ...
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Line 6, column 533, Rule ID: KNEW_NEW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'new'?
Suggestion: new
...brought us into another hotel. we later knew that our tour guide used to get commiss...
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Line 9, column 342, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...rivacy. For supporting instance, when I was been to Pokhara with my friends few months b...
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Line 9, column 458, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'kissed'.
Suggestion: kissed
... some fun. We wanted to smoke, and have kiss with our girlfreinds, however, we had a...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...g in a group led by a tour guide is not a best way to travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2414.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 582.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14776632302 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36327698688 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.340206185567 0.524837075471 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 14.0 3.51792114695 398% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2356669441 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4666666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384928654559 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147114199712 0.076458572812 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129617265814 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297036597352 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071800422321 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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