Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is one of the most beutifel exprience an individual could have. I totally agree with traveling with in a group guided by tourist. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, tourist job is showing us a different unknown placese of the new countray we visit. Since we travel to discover a new city we usually do not know about all diffrerent location that city has. Furthermore, a tour will explore un popular placese in which make our trip unforgating. This is best demonstrated by my personal experience. When I traveled to Paris last year, I had the most beautifel memoriez in my life. At that time, me and my sister traveled with group led by tour and we almost visited all places in that lovely country. In addition, we had come a cross some un popular location like the De lu potan park were only local citizent are enjoy there time in it. Eventually, with help of gudied tour I manged to see a lot of woundful placese in Paris. I am so sure If any one had the chance to visit an area away from his home town, he will enjoy in his trip by the help of tourist.
Second, traveling with group will enhances our skills in communication. In particular, by going in journey with new pepole we will exchange our ideas and opinions. Moreover, learing varitey of things about different cultures as well. For instance, in my trip to Paris, I had the pleasure to meet a nice Asian girl. Obviously, we spent a long time talking about her background and how her country look like. So, while she speaks I have been motivated to see her city and he family. Certainly, we exchanged phone numbers and social media accounts. Currntely, we developed a long distances frindship. So, If I c didnot travel with group, I want not have this amazing frindship.
In conculsion, I strongly encourage people to travel within group with the help of tour. This is because that going in this type of journies will make us explore large number of locations and make more interaction with other people in future.
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...make more interaction with other people in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in particular, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55163043478 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56431767337 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567934782609 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8267457096 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8260869565 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167663263573 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541877676063 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706200850159 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11973489978 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517937125889 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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