"True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace."
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your essay, consider instances in which the statement does and does not hold true.
The statement argues that commonplace is where we will find true beauty instead of the exceptional. Surely the common day-to-day life does not preclude the existence of beauty. The park at the next corner of your apartment building, when the sun just rises and the birds visit while singing malifluous songs, would definitely comfy your heart. You might find the street artist in your most frequently visited subway station plays Jazz with his antiquated saxophone the most enjoyable thing. We would praise them as being beautiful because that’s what our feeling tells us.
It is true that we can find beauty in daily life, however, beauty would gradually turn to dull due to its easiness to obtained. Walking across a tranquil country road every day lasting for five years, the most imaginative people would feel boring as the same beauty has been praised countless of times. Tackling with the same tasks every day, the most exciting job would become the killer of aesthetics. Repetition, the element most entailed in what we mean by common, is the least place where one would find true beauty.
True beauty comes with the efforts one takes to look for it. It’s rather paradoxical that the most popular scene marked in tourist website is often the most prosaic one. The popularity might result from its convenient transportation as well as smart marketing strategy. With artificial elements proliferate, it is, in many cases the opposite of true beauty. A travelling expert will choose other approaches to plan his or her trip. Instead of a click on the internet, they might contact local resident, read public journals written by previous traveler, and even check for historic books with records of its destination. With many endeavors being made, the exceptional sight will be discovered and true beauty would reveal itself.
What’s in contrast with the word common is uniqueness. Uniqueness is itself is a component of beauty. Just like the great pleasure a baby would have felt when he or she take the first look of the world, a chemist would be thrilled when he or she find a new substance ever appear in the history. Likewise, when the crew of Columbus stepped their feet on America, the New World, the beauty must have been what amazed them first. Scientists spending thousands of hours in lab, explorers who risk their life for the most unique adventure and for new discoveries, craftsman who devotes their life to the creation of the exceptional art… it is true beauty that calls for their dedication. It is to the extent of exceptional that they can find the spirit of true beauty.
In short, one might catch true beauty in commonplace, but the most common way of seeing true beauty is at the most exceptional. The amount of efforts devoted in pursuit of being exceptional are what really marked the essence of true beauty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...e a baby would have felt when he or she take the first look of the world, a chemist ...
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Line 13, column 252, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...hemist would be thrilled when he or she find a new substance ever appear in the hist...
^^^^
Line 13, column 518, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
..., explorers who risk their life for the most unique adventure and for new discoveries, craf...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 770, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey can find the spirit of true beauty. In short, one might catch true beauty in...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, look, really, so, well, while, in contrast, in short, as well as, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97713097713 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54399865363 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544698544699 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5992683987 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0416666667 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073063192635 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229658293617 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022574553317 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479373794888 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259820083294 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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