The statement transmits the message that if you have a worthy goal, you have most of what it takes to truly succeed. This view is quite idealistic in a world in which success is measured not by your intentions, but by the outcomes of your actions. While the latter approach is too pragmatic and can lead to loss of morale or hope, the former goes too much in the other direction and can lead to resentment or delusion.
We are complicated beings living in a harsh world. We don't find fulfillment in goals that are too easy to obtain, but in goals that take dedication, determination, skill, boldness... Not only that, but the consequences of attaining these goals should improve your life, or someone else's. Some say that having the goal is already enough, even if you fail at reaching it. While the reasoning behind this has some truth to it, having the goal is essential, but ultimately insufficient. It is true that some people never try anything big because they think it's absurd that a "normal" person can achieve great things. But some people also believe that just by being determined enough, all their goals will be accomplished. This can lead to the usual "I'm a misunderstood genius" syndrome, which is anything but success. Success implies having a goal, a specific plan to achieve it, and several extra plans for when the first plan fails. It implies both intention and action.
The statement could be trying to mean that "true success" is something like happiness or fulfillment, for which the most important ingredient is a goal. This might be true for some people, but for most of us the journey is about as important as the destination. Plus, if you dedicate your life to attain some goal and actually try to do it, it is very unlikely that you will see no results.
In summary, true success is measured by both the goals and how close you get to attaining them. The goals measure ambition, and the results measure ability. You need both to succeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ated beings living in a harsh world. We dont find fulfillment in goals that are too ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... big because they think its absurd that a 'normal' person can achieve g...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ished. This can lead to the usual 'Im a misunderstood genius' syndrome, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, while, in summary, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79190751445 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74525704305 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540462427746 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0349744285 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2631578947 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308727362841 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09361253418 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560813385665 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212039827586 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373741365763 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.