True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you ta

According to the given statement that the goals set for oneself primarily measures the true success. I agree with the statement to some extent and to support my opinion the subsequent paragraphs are provided below.

Firstly, Success does not have a definite path and also it is a subjective matter as what may be success to me may not be success for other person. For example, maybe getting a good job and car is success for me whereas following passion and happiness is success for the other person. Success is about setting the goals for oneself or desire and need that one accomplish in life. Hence, it is an important factor for measuring the success.

Moreover, there is a difference between success and true success. Generally, people consider success to what they perceive which is wealth and fame but true success is when a person in his/her own respect defines oneself successful. For example, people consider a film star a successful person but the actor may consider true success when he/she wins oscar for his/her acting. Some even consider true success by happiness, if a person is happy in leading the life then he/she is having true success. Thus, different goals have their own meaning of success.

However, it would be wrong to say that setting goal is the only or primary factor which measures the success as there have been many person on this earth who are success because of their destiny. For example, the ex-captain of Indian Cricket team M.S Dhoni who is a famous batsman now. Initially wanted to become a footballer but his coach saw potential in him and guided him to become a batsman which is way different from what he set his goal. So, there are other factors which measure the success.

In the conclusion, i would like to say that the success is measured in terms of the goals one sets for oneself but there are other factors too which are important.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...the ex-captain of Indian Cricket team M.S Dhoni who is a famous batsman now. Init...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sure the success. In the conclusion, i would like to say that the success is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7537993921 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41222898587 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492401215805 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0809104332 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31989138738 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137756807784 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742452740015 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224701752483 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528461274066 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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