To understand the major characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
What defines a society? A society is viewed as an environment or a surrounding where a group of people sharing various characteristics such as origins, ethnicity, and so forth, interact and connect with one another. Knowing the parameters that defines a society require the understanding and comprehension of the various aspects and locations located within that society. I personally would agree with the statement that evaluating the major cities of a societal environment would provide major glimpse of what a society is. However, people often neglect certain societal aspects and cities, which despite being minor or small, may give great value and worth to the society in question. Therefore, in order to understand a society, one must all elements that represent that society which include major as well as minor cities and locations.
One aspect that could be discussed in favor of the statement is based on the fact, that major cities of a societal surrounding has the potential to provides certain ideas associated with a society, particularly in terms of luxury, power and even economy. In fact, visiting a place that presents a luxurious and elaborate environment would indicate similar pattern within the surrounding society. Similarly, a poor neighborhood would propel people to view the surrounding society as indigent and uninspiring. Furthermore, countries or societal environments can be classified based on their capacities for developments, progression and technology. In fact, the presence or absence of various technological developments and discoveries is what distinguishes a third-world country such as Lebanon and Palestine from developed countries such as the United States and Japan. In fact, the USA or japan are viewed as developed countries based on the fact that technological and luxurious developments are present within certain major cities, neglecting the fact that other minor cities might actually lack such luxury and economy. This argument provides ideas on how people evaluate a society merely based on its major cities and what’s presented within in.
What about minor elements? Aren’t those considered as important in order to evaluate a society and understand certain of its characteristics? Certain minor cities, which despite lacking luxury that might be present within major cities, might actually various various touristic locations and even cultural and historical elements that people all around the world may find intriguing. In fact, people would travel to a certain country merely to visit such locations. For instance, Lebanon, although viewed as a minuscule under-developed countries, is actually the site of various touristic places such as “Jetta Grotto” and even “Baalou’ Bal’a”. This fact would suggest that the cultural and historical value of a society could be essentially attributed to cities that despite being minor, may give a great value to the entire society in which it is present.
In conclusion, it is practically impossible to evaluate a society without considering all the elements that represent it. In fact, a society could be evaluated in terms of various parameters such as luxury, culture, tourism and even history. Understanding all those parameters requires not only the aspects that are associated with major cities, but also the ones associated with minor cities, that despite being viewed as minuscule, could provide a great sense of comprehending a society to a similar extent to larger cities, if not greater.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3003.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5405904059 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11269923526 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409594095941 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 954.0 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2333012357 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205375262852 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693922532115 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086569906713 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141766361835 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688293170496 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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