The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We could all agree that the main responsibility of any authorative or governmental figure is to enhance and maintain the well-being as well as satisfaction of the surrounded society and its citizens. however, in certain circumstances, the authority might not take the best course of action or decision that provides a good wellfare of a societal environment. therefore, I would agree that questioning authority might in certain cases be the best way to ensure the well-being of any society.
it is imperative to consider certain aspects of the provided statement that might not actually hold true. In fact, questioning authority sometimes might harm the society rather than aid it.
any authority has the potential to provide judicious ideas that might lead to a course of action that will ensure the well-shaped of a society. In such cases, questioning this kind of authority would surely deteriorate the authorative figure's ability to ensure the occurrence of something that might help the society and its citizens. For instance, the authority might provide an idea or a decision that societal citizens could see as repugnant but would actually be in their best interest. some examples would include the promulgation of certain law regulations associated with the usage of technology wihin unacceptable environment or even the simplest, maintaining a speed limit of 80 Km/h. Many citizens don't exactly agree with the administration of such regulations despite being in their best interest and safety.
although it is reasonable to refute the statement in certain conditions, adopting it might be the best way to ensure the well-being of the society and the citizens alike.
this idea is generally applied in cases where authority doesn't provide a keen judgement in the decisions or course of action it make which would harm the society as well as its citizens. questioning such authority would hinder the process of adopting such ideas, and therefore, would avoid the application of strategies that would be proven to malign the society and alter its shape and organization. For instance, the lack of power and electricity was proven to be burdersome to the people within a society. The authority has the vital role to ensure that each member of its society receive electricity almost 24 hours daily, although certain countries present a 24 hours power off. Not adressing this issue to the government and authoritive figures, will lead to its perpetuation. Nevertheless, making th authority understand about the negative impact a lack of electricity has on the public would potentially ensure the authority to take action in order to solve such problem.
In conclusion, any authority within any country is far from bein perfect. therefore, authority might engender matters that could either harm or benefit the society along with its citizens. therefore, questioning authority might, in some cases, hinder a process that would be benficial to society. however, in other cases wuere authority would have made a questionable choice, dissenting its decision would actually be the best course of action to take in order to avoid the application of procedures, strategies and regulations that would possibility negatively impact the society as well as its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2762.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31153846154 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9711532238 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413461538462 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.594132755 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.523809524 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7619047619 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160446640093 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618650733188 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421609153812 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108336079649 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264832736364 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.