The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Can it be said that a society is enhanced when many of its people question its authorities?
As often said, “two heads are better than one”, it can also be said that the thoughts of and questioning by many is by far better.
It is clear that societal wellbeing is enhanced when many of it’s people question its authorities.
Democracy for one which is practiced by advanced countries like the United states of America is judged as one of the best system of governance as it is government for the people by the people. In many ways, this system has shown to prove a great success for it’s people because often times the government is been criticized by various levels of lower governments, congress and the general public and so they are on their toes to deliver the best and to push beyond bounds with their given resources.
Although it can be said that given such freedom to question authority certain selfish and political minded situations occur to distort the the direction of the society’s well. Even so the many positive cannot be overlooked.
A society that allow for questioning of it authorities allows for the views of every part of the societies to heard from states to towns to communities hereby allowing for common growth of every level since people would always know where the shoes hurt.
Futhermore, such societies allow for a general peaceful atmosphere since they would generally enjoy freedom of speech and other benefits of human rights as compared to countries where the leadership practice is absolute leadership.
Ultimately, a society that allows for questioning and criticism will definitely progress rapidly since such criticism often bring forth the best of ideas and thoughts to light and if well adopted by the authorities will allow for better progress of all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... best of ideas and thoughts to light and if well adopted by the authorities will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06600660066 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71217660318 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9212737636 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207636931263 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102715306948 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668927326989 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113697416023 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717919626313 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.