The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Throughout history, cataclysmic developments of a society occurred whenever there was a rebellious movement like in France. Nevertheless, some policies require a steadfast implementation even thought it raises controversy. Furthermore, strong resistance may be a obstacle for the stability of a nation.
Admittedly, the when the public raises queries about the government, the society will laws will be likely ameliorated. Without a objection to the authority, the government will be unable to assess the opinions of the people and thus will regard the public's silence as acquiesce. Hence, legislations are not likely to incorporate the people's needs or notions about the society. For instance, without the anti-slave movements in the US, the emancipation proclamation will not have been declared because the government would have been indifferent to the equality of humans beings: it is the objections and protests that made this issue recognizable by the government.
Nevertheless, in contrary to the rebellious attitude of the public, a strong authority in the economics could be favorable to the nation. Some policies may be too profound for the general people to understand and misunderstandings sometimes entail refute. If it is certain to lead to propitious results, in these cases the government should implement the legislation regardless of the dissent of the public. For instance, Donald Trump's enconomic policy of the US shows this. At first, his policy of restricting the economy so that it is favorable to only a portion of the citizens seem to inhibit the free market and thus derogate the economy. However, a increased inhibition lead to a positive advancement of the economy which is a result that most people could not have anticipated. Thus resistace resulting from a lack of knowledge may be futile.
Last but not least, social stability may be compromised when people raise too much objections. Especially in developing countries, people are dubious about the competence of the government and they show this by violent resistence which is obviously noxious for a tranquility of a community. In Africa, various nations are suffering from a lack of government control: people violently resist to their governments resulting in instigations. These situations are stirring up the country and it is difficult to find halcyon.
In conclusion, although objections raised coherently may enhance the countries situations, sometimes a firm grasp of power by the leaders leads to positive effects, not to mention the negative consequences resulting from fierce resistance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Furthermore, strong resistance may be a obstacle for the stability of a nation....
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...aws will be likely ameliorated. Without a objection to the authority, the governm...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: human beings
...ave been indifferent to the equality of humans beings: it is the objections and protests that...
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Line 9, column 654, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...and thus derogate the economy. However, a increased inhibition lead to a positive...
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Line 9, column 786, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...most people could not have anticipated. Thus resistace resulting from a lack of know...
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Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ay be compromised when people raise too much objections. Especially in developing co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.515 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20347370053 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5475 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5302360691 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.105263158 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128474909587 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400954722334 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317916343732 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688045546742 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211200871124 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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