Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the current society, actions of an individual, corporation, and even the government is being broadcast to the public. Thus, due to the mass media the construction of a good image has become important, and it is sometimes critical in one's success. Nevertheless, the truth cannot be always hidden behind the artful image.
Admittedly, with the spread of the internet, the mass media has enabled the public to get instant access to all sorts of information. Celebrities, politicians have become aware of this ceaseless scrutiny and have started to use the mass media for their advantage: they spread pictures of themselves participating in social services, acknowledge people about their donations, and all sorts of good deeds of idols are spread through the internet. The public then perceives the prominent as generous and benevolent even though the actions were based on one's avarice for popularity and did not come from a truly warm heart. Hence, it is the image that becomes the people's interest rather than the true human behind that image.
Furthermore, the perception of a individual or the company has become a core factor in deciding success. For instance, Starbucks was able to succeed in the global market because of it's image of using high quality coffee beans and not taking advantage of child labor in developing countries. In addition, Korea in 2002 was able to raise the nation's reputation by hosting the World Cup successfully and by going up in the semifinals. The result was a sharp rise in Korea's stock market due to the ameliorated image of this Asian country.
Nevertheless, sometimes a appealing image cannot hide the truth. By showing a certain part, a good image may be constructed by deceiving the gullible public. However, there are many instances where these images are different from the truth. For instance, IU a famous Korean singer was idolized because of her ingenuine image but, was found guilty of tax law infringement: the public was very disappointed by her duplicity when she was not in front of the camera. After the incident, she lost popularity and has disappeared into oblivion.
In conclusion, creating a appealing image may be important, especially with the fleeting flow of information. On the other hand, the sustain the image, the truth behind it should be coherent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...on, Korea in 2002 was able to raise the nations reputation by hosting the World Cup suc...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ian country. Nevertheless, sometimes a appealing image cannot hide the truth. ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to oblivion. In conclusion, creating a appealing image may be important, espec...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...flow of information. On the other hand, the sustain the image, the truth behind it should b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09947643979 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83584709166 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2874032253 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13594505474 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505014918742 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460020042182 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851655749667 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412596665293 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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