To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Society basically constitutes of culture or lifestyle followed by people in the particular state or country. The way of thinking, language spoken, dressing, food habits, financial conditions, development process of the area everything plays equally important role in the study of characteristics of the society. Each factor is equally important. In my view, the most important features of society cannot be understood by studying its major cities because the essence of the true culture of the society can be understood only by studying the area where it is still followed.
Consider, a major city Paris. If a woman comes to a Starbucks, with a classy dress and expensive bag , you will not be able to judge the characteristics of Paris by her appearance or behavior. You can encounter lady like her in every other major city as this has become a trend in most of the developed city. Paris can tell you about fashion, garment industry who has roots in some other country. So, to find out about the french culture one should do research on the places where the culture still pertains which is the small cities where maximum population speaks french.
Moreover, due to increment of job opportunities available in the major cities people of different country travel to those cities. This results in amalgam of culture in big cities or it can be implied that there is unity in diversity in major cities as people of all the different cultures are living. Extensive excavations in Pakistan led to discovery of mohenjodaro culture. But, earlier people were confined to one city only. So, it was possible earlier that studying major cities would give proper understanding of the culture. But, this does not hold true in today's rapidly developing world.
So, it can be concluded by the bulk of examples given that study of major studies would not give a clear and full understanding of the culture of a society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254237288136 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.129943502825 0.157235817809 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107344632768 0.0880659088768 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480225988701 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0310734463277 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141242937853 0.12292977631 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0480225988701 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76963096402 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197740112994 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.00282485875706 0.0016655270985 170% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988700564972 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282485875706 0.0249443105267 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141242937853 0.0148568991511 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1919.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 322.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95962732919 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354037267081 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282608695652 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192546583851 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127329192547 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76963096402 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 57.5246588962 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.125 23.380412469 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5458887861 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9375 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 23.380412469 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.674092028746 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.3858695652 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.12162162162 1.64882698954 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408502355381 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104857030173 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06968227235 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514205089971 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223215334894 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143829076985 0.161403998019 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953739821319 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334247786891 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00722193477232 0.0692045440612 10% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271864158061 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632912759374 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.