To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Society is defined and characterized of the people living in it. It is moulded and shaped by the cultures, values and views of the communities described in it. It is these characteristics which helps the people associate themselves as a part of the society. However these cultures and traditions change from region to region and one certain set of definitions can’t summarize the entire society. Thus I don’t agree with author that the most important characteristics are understood by studying the main cities.
With the advent of technology the world has become closer with people of different nationals and cultures residing side by side in the same city. These amalgamations are pertaining mostly to the major cities only. Such cities are being lined up with high glass faced buildings. With this current form of city planning and creation, the major cities could anywhere on the planet and still be a part of the area. This has resulted in creating monotonous cities which have no soul to the city. Although these amalgamations of the cultures does create a new culture of its own, it however can not describe and summarize the society of a nation completely. Moreover to reside in such amalgamated cultures one has to lose a part of their own to be able to fit into the society. Thus truly understand a society one should go deep into the small towns and countryside. For example, India is a country of many cultures and traditions. These cultures and tradition vary from region to region which are affected by various factors such as geography, historic events etc. The characteristic of the southern part of the country, especially the smaller towns is very different from the northern counterpart of the nation. From clothing to rituals to their general views, the society is completely different. Whereas the southerners believe in simple living and high thinks, most of the northerners believe in living life king style.
Thus to truly understand a society, one should study a various developments as they contribute a certain part to the society making. Some of the important characteristics of a society are lost in the major cities, which citizens coming from various parts of the society trying to fit in.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'whereas', 'as to', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232273838631 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.161369193154 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904645476773 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0440097799511 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0268948655257 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129584352078 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0537897310513 0.0406280797675 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86440616724 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0317848410758 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.00244498777506 0.0016655270985 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.129584352078 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122249388753 0.0249443105267 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00977995110024 0.0148568991511 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2244.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04851752022 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371967654987 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277628032345 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194070080863 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121293800539 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86440616724 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498652291105 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 53.2038371281 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.55 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8272371667 59.4972553346 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.55 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 46.3128032345 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.78947368421 1.64882698954 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442755327043 0.391690518653 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108340913598 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839705169377 0.077325440228 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.488129955947 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167128815034 0.149214159877 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167735166335 0.161403998019 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842959200869 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.597432216392 0.385218514788 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0528226032004 0.0692045440612 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37403606111 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820861468275 0.0653680567796 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.