To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Endeavour to study the most important characteristics of a society is something that many social researchers are actively trying to do. However, it would be wrong to state that the in order to contemplate the most important aspects of a society, one must study its major cities. A simple reason would be that the urban population is simply not representative of the entire society, as it doesn't consider into account the characteristics of the people living in small towns or villages.
The lifestyle of people living in major cities is significantly different than the people living in villages or small towns. This can be observed from the contrasting lifestyle of the people. In major cities, people have a very busy, ambitious and modern life style. The structure of society is entirely different. People are more inclined towards their own schedules and are more focused in attaining their goals. In fact they are so engrossed with their work that they don’t even consider communicating with their own neighbours. Whereas, this is simply not the scenario in small towns or villages. People living in these areas generally lead a simple life, devoid of huge ambitions and spend a considerable amount of time socializing with other people living nearby. Hence, we can clearly observe the stark difference in the lifestyles of people living in major cities and villages. Hence, trying to draw the most important characteristics of a society from the urban population itself would not be justified.
Apart from the above, if we look carefully, the society structure is completely different in people living in villages and large cities. A simple example would be the villages and major cities of India. The villages in India, have a very different society structure. Here, the village is headed by the most elderly person of the village, whose decision is revered by all the inhabitants of the village. Hence, when a dispute arises amongst the inhabitants, rather than following a proper judicial system, generally the justice is delivered by the village headman. However, if we consider the major cities, there is no such thing. Whenever there is a dispute between the people, they move to the courts for justice, rather than a small gathering. Thus, again trying to draw the picture of the most important characteristics of the society solely from urban population would be detrimental, as it would not consider the societal aspects of village life.
In addition, today the major cities are full of vehicles and pollution. Any major city is generally described by fast moving people, lots of vehicles and exorbitant amount of sound and noise pollution. Apart from the above, major cities are generally characterised by huge number of high rise buildings and concrete roads. But this is not true for small townships or countryside. The countryside is generally devoid from all the above. It is generally serene, peaceful and free of pollution.
However, it is definitely true that a significant number of people live in the major cities. Hence, to some extent it would be right to simply consider the important characteristics of the society from the urban population. But is not true everywhere. In several countries, like India, more people live in the country side rather than in major cities. Hence, in these countries trying to draw the important characteristics of the society from the major cities would not give us a very clear picture of the society.
Hence, in a nutshell, trying to gather knowledge about the important aspects of a society from the major cities is not a very good idea considering the good number of people living in the village side. Moreover, the significant differences in the surroundings and lifestyle of the people living in urban and village areas.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235632183908 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.127873563218 0.157235817809 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114942528736 0.0880659088768 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0747126436782 0.0497285424764 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272988505747 0.0444667217837 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129310344828 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0416666666667 0.0406280797675 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84209973857 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0158045977011 0.030933414821 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117816091954 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158045977011 0.0249443105267 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00431034482759 0.0148568991511 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3802.0 2732.02544248 139% => OK
No of words: 623.0 452.878318584 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10272873194 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.58838876751 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399678972713 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266452648475 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192616372392 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139646869984 0.132149295362 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84209973857 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388443017657 0.48968727796 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.9286770725 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6194690265 165% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3235294118 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2818206255 59.4972553346 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.823529412 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3235294118 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 44.9687942593 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.76875 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448454899274 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145754628872 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115068678311 0.077325440228 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525808180338 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166800179181 0.149214159877 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187808018775 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975062379703 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.485079017941 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10047511625 0.0692045440612 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346045901177 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701037771305 0.0653680567796 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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