To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

This topic raises the controversial issue of whether most important characteristics of a society depends on

it's major cities. Indisputably, a society,being a vast organization, is constituent of a lot of elements. Major

cities are just another element of this vast organization and study of a single element should not be considered

as enough resource to understand socities most important attributes. Nevertheless, it is the major cities which

actually do reflect the norms-rituals-lifestyle of a particular society and those reflections actually help to

understand a society's characteristics. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that study of major cities

is inadequate to understand the characteristic of a society and would argue that studying the major cities will

really give insights to the characteristics of a society.

First of all, major cities are actually considered as the prime locations where people of all social status

tend to come for a better life. So, when studying a major city, one will definitely come accross all the social

standards of the socirty. I would like to point out that the characteristic of a society primarily depends on the

people who live that society and there is no better place to observe the types of people living in that society

than a major city. To illustrate, let us look at the example of understanding the characteristices of a company.

In this circumstance , obviously one would like to examine the major achievements and major set backs of that

company which do reflect the characteristics of that company. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that major cities

do illustrate the living of most affluent and most needy people of the society.

Furthermore, neglecting the major cities would result in an sparse view of society. If important

characteristics of the society were obtainable neglecting the major cities, then the major cities would not be

actually qualified as major cities. Specifically, the main idea of major cities come from the it's variation

of life styles. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that neglecting major cities would merely

provide any view of the society. Hence, all the evidence above demonstrates that study of the major cities is the

way to find out most important characteristics of a society.

Admittedly, sometimes study of only the major cities may not be sufficient for all the individual important

characteristics of a society. This is true especially when it comes to a society which is diversly spreaded.

In addition, some society even don't have any major cities as they are underdevelopped. However, the above argument

does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that study of major cities is not enough to find the most important

characteristics of a socirty. Because the types of socity mentioned in the previous lines are examples of exceptional

types of society.

In conclusion, although some exceptional socities may not have major cities as representatives of

socity's character, for most cases major city's are the representative of socit. As long as some

measurements are performed, or some areas are involved, this assertion will work. In fact,

{extend the topic to broader/more abstract areas}.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2819.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45261121857 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32725186006 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431334622824 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3713751154 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.458333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5416666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95833333333 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.97078651685 624% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210732239158 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735923743053 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050467673282 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706711244491 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481196710309 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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