To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
A country is a large society where people of various caste, cullture, background and other aspects
live together. Many may know about some parts of this society and might consider it trivial while
some might consider other parts trivial. The prompt is to get information about a specific area
by studying major parts of it. It compares society to a land where a certain type of vegetation is
most productive an to sudy about the study of land one can study the type of production of the land.
I strongly disagree with the prompt beacause study of some part is determined by the aspect under consideration.
One can get the most information by studying a certain area whereas other may not find the area useful.
Which city is to be studied is determined by the type of case an individual considers crucial and it is
explained by these two points.
Firstly,To get a brief knowledge of a specific cultural group one must study the area to which the group
are native. Some group may dwell in the sophisticated cities whereas some may reside in rural areas or
even may live primitively. For instance, to know about Chepang people of Nepal we must go to the deep
forest area of tropical region where they inhibit. They donot come to developed areas despite being
offered houses and other donations. Whereas, to know about Rana people we must go to developed areas
beacause Ranas are mostly sybarite. They want to live their life in an enhanced way surrounded by
technologies and comfort. The study to bea taken in consideration is deterined by the group under study.
Secondly, If a person want to learn about some religious heritage site one must look about the places
where the sites are present not the role of the city in the society. Suppose to know about the religious
site of Muslim people the first place that comes in anyone mind is Macca-Madina of Saudi Arab which is one
of the major city of the country since millions of people from the world visit there annually. Macca is the
city from where Saudi earns billions of revenues from tourist evry year and is also well planned city to
make visit of the people memorable. But, the birthplace of Lord Ram of Hindu people, Ayodhya, is not a
major city of India. Many Indians have not gone to the place till and even have no plans ahead.
However, when the consideration of development is the pivotal study one must always choose the urbane areas.
Development in a part of society easies a larger area than the area of development. Many countries have only
one international airport, world stature playground, and a few renowned universities that can be found only in
major cities. Is really the study of deveopment only the areas enhanced? Study of development also requires
to focus attention on the areas where the development has not been grasped. Thus the study area is choosen
only on the basis of the factor to be considered not weather the part the area plays on the society. Certain
characterstics may be a major focus to some but minor to other consequently the city under study.
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...ot come to developed areas despite being offered houses and other donations. Wher...
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...ana people we must go to developed areas beacause Ranas are mostly sybarite. They...
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...world visit there annually. Macca is the city from where Saudi earns billions of ...
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...d Ram of Hindu people, Ayodhya, is not a major city of India. Many Indians have n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80560747664 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57791096538 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446728971963 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4456608273 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8846153846 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5769230769 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.97078651685 604% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251741539203 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722447953441 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466919094109 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685097183144 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540359403771 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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