To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the current era of unevenly technology advancement and wealth resources, some cities are ahead of others in becoming the core and even the symbol of a country. This kind of major cities play an important role in a country undoubtedly.They dominate the direction of its economy and politics,and even the culture of the society would also be affected.The speaker suggests that the major cities must be research objects for understanding the most essential features of a society. In my view, this statement is too extreme.It overrates the representativeness of the major cities, as well as ignoring the influence of other areas on the society.Thus I totally disagree with the proposition that would reflect a too narrow view of social characteristics and the selection of regions.
Admittedly, to some extent, major cities can represent a country or even society’s characteristics. This kind of cities are usually the most prosperous regions in a society,which may have influence in the whole society. For example, the designers in London have a preference in the pattern in plaid form, and this could become the distinctive feature of Britain gradually.In addition,many people across the country are inclined to move to the cities. As a result, the integration of various cultures has thus generated the characteristics of the cities, which can indeed represent the characteristics of the entire society.
However, the representativeness has been gradually fading due to the increase of the globalization.Thus, the main cities in each country have the tendency of homogenization with the loss of the uniqueness. Moreover, in some countries especially the developing countries, the level of development in the different areas has obvious disparity resulting in special cases for a society the major cities have become. The boom of some first-tier cities in China such as Beijing,Shanghai and Guangzhou can not illustrate the economy of China is well-developed.In fact, the economy in some rural areas is still below the average level.
As a matter of fact that the major cities are no longer representative, it could be difficult to learn about the society through investigating the situation of the main cities merely.Meanwhile,different countries have different conditions,which means It is very important to select the appropriate object according to the actual situation.The main cities in the developed countries might still have a strong representativeness of social features while those in the developing countries may not.Due to the uneven economic level development between different regions in developing countries, the social culture and living habits are also different.
To sum up, the study of major cities is not comprehensive and profound enough in the cognition of social characteristics.Undoubtedly,the study of the major cities would be helpful to do the research.However,to gain a better understanding of a society, we must pay attention to both the main cities and other areas like small cities and rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, even so, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46921443737 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76196603152 2.79657885939 135% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475583864119 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 819.9 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.077591254 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.666666667 118.986275619 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 5.21951772744 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180837045385 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740857216657 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429535740576 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108863106651 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036973463973 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 48.8420337079 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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