To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is similar to saying, look at the beauty of an apartment, and don’t bother about what it is made from. In a given argument, the author is providing only one aspect of studying the important characteristics of a society by studying its important cities, but according to me, it is equally important to study villages and small cities to understand the characteristics of a particular society.
Firstly, major cities in terms of developing countries, are a mere mirage. People living in there are following social values of developed countries. For example, in developing countries like India or countries in Africa, Child labor is a predominant issue. But the same issue is not seen in their major cities because of well-educated people and facilities present. Contrary to that, due to lack exposure to the world, societies present in the small villages facing this issue.
Secondly, there are many countries where the major population lives in villages and small towns. Hence their cultural and social values may be different from that of major cities. For example, in India, the agricultural sector is majorly represented by the villages where people prefer farming over the engineering or medical field which is exactly opposite to the people in the major cities.
Looking on the positive side of the argument, Major cities consist of an amalgamation of different parts of the nation or society representing different cultural and social values. Also learning centers, colleges, famous universities are mostly situated in the major cities. So studying and understanding intellectual output will definitely help to understand the important characteristics of the society.
After looking at the both aspect of the argument, it could be said that, though major cities give a solid base to understand the social and cultural values of a society, it may be artificial. Evaluating and understanding the characteristics of a society is not an easy job, one must consider the different aspects and development of different part of a nation to understand the true characteristics of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29552238806 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09617719294 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489552238806 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0889684244 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194189476482 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622340621247 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613276137134 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115837562348 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491499953338 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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