To Understand The Most Important Characteristics Of A Society, One Must Study Its Major Cities

Studying about a society and culture is always been a intriguing topic to anyone who has special interests in it. Starting from a historian to amateur story writer, every one is fascinated by the under the veil aspects of any culture that a book or class room lecture cannot give us. For this, we need to study the culture by visiting that place. But visiting only cities, never serve us the purpose that we are yearning for. So, what stated by the author is purely surmised version of his or her perception.

Early Aryan civilization of India had been found in Horappa and Mohenjodaro. But the historians not only studied the area that belonged to these cities but also the surrounded areas of Indus and Sutlej river to give their final conclusion. So, here we can see if anthropologists would have studied only Horappa and Mohenjodaro, it would not got the actual details that they were searching for. So, it is quite evident that the statement is quite weaker to put forward.

Egyptian culture and social-economic studies not only focus on the cities of Cairo, Alexandria but also encompass the whole Egypt. Several times several scientists and historians tried to cover the small aspects of the Egyptian culture and societies but the invention became quite uni-directional led them to one aspects of the society. But to study a society and a culture you have to consider the whole country or whole region; not the cities and important trade centers. Society is never formed only based on a city. Even a village can have a society that a particular group of peoples manage to maintain to nurture their tradition and believes. So, this statement is severely fallacious.

Contrast to this, medieval Europe was flourished on the banks of the important rivers of Volga, Po, Danube mainly around the cities like Rome, Florence and further the different societies were founded on these cities. The different aspects of different societies can be studied in the medieval cities of Europe and but that is not only limited to Cities other aspects also matter here. Although, here majority of the studies were done in Cities, so in this particular case the statement somehow manages to prove it's hypothesis.

But one thing is quite prominent that only studying a City and it's culture do not give you a clear picture of a society. You should have a fair idea about the whole region which further brights up the prospects of your experiment. So the statement here is severely weak to substantiate it's point. It should do more research and come up with a concrete conclusion.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'had studied'?
Suggestion: had studied
... So, here we can see if anthropologists would have studied only Horappa and Mohenjodaro, it would ...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...y Horappa and Mohenjodaro, it would not got the actual details that they were searc...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one aspect', 'an aspect', or simply 'aspects'?
Suggestion: one aspect; an aspect; aspects
...ecame quite uni-directional led them to one aspects of the society. But to study a society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87243735763 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63591427472 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501138952164 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0581540556 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2272727273 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 5.21951772744 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19219876918 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531941027622 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602795543252 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108969113055 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368183248243 0.0667264976115 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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