Money, Job and a stable career are one of the basic needs for human being. Every human being has the need for a good career with good financial security and also a peaceful life. But that does not mean that human life is only centered on these things. There are other responsibilities come with the life of being a human and that is doing something for the society that you are living in; for your family that you are living with or will be for long time. But that society not only consists of only human being, that also consists of several species other than humans and those are plants, animals and in short - the environment.
But in these days the responsibility towards these important things are severely ignored.People today are running behind money, for an exorbitant life style for show off their status. They forget there are also other things which are not only career and money. They not only neglect their responsibilities towards family and society they also polluting the environment with out thinking twice. Today the pollution level increases in leaps and bounds and the effect is very visible by the declination of several species not only plants but also animals. Polar bear, siberian birds are one the important species that really face the wrath of these blunders. Due to increase in global warming, the ice coverage are melting down day by day and depleting the living habitats of polar bear and siberian birds. So, it is quite evident that our people living in a self-centered society where they are escaping from the their duties and leading their future generation towards den of discord.
The rampage does not stop here. Human being are so avarice for high prolific life style and under this seduction of comfort they are making lofty dreams which are converted into high rise buildings as well as annihilation of green. Expensive cars, stylish accessories for comfort, usage of chrolo fluro carbons depleting the ozone layer, increasing the high CO level in the air.And the result is very poor. Depletion of ozone layer means ultra violet ray are directly absorbing in our environment making human lives full of crucial diseases that we ever heard of. Also the average temperature of the world increased by 3 degrees which is quite alarming for us. But still ignoring these facts and people are taking themselves in the path of destruction. To live a healthy and peaceful life we need to understand that the earth is not only consists of human beings but also other inhabitat on whom we are severely dependent. To stop this clemency, we need to educate ourselves about the nature and of its peripherals but also educate other people for preventing the pollution of the earth.
But there are indeed some good minds who are really working hard to educate the people about environment and their responsibilities towards it. The growth is quite positive but still more to be needed to make extra ordinary efforts to control this damage. So, people who are still in oblivion about this, should educate themselves about their society and environment and then can only a stable future can be made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e important things are severely ignored.People today are running behind money, for an ...
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...yer, increasing the high CO level in the air.And the result is very poor. Depleti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, then, well, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87781954887 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49102878729 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477443609023 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5683288018 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.826086957 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1304347826 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137471402895 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412755756866 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447103770949 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083623658999 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374254573144 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.