Unfortunately, media tries to highlight what is sensational at the moment. Society should be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events that would ultimately have the most long lasting significance
Media is the main means of mass communication throughout the world and people relies on media for the information of the events taking place all around the world. However, recent trend of media to exaggerate what is sensational at the moment has negative consequences. I therefore personally agree that media should rather focus on the events that would have the most long lasting significance in order to serve the society for the following reasons.
Media people know the fact that people throughout the globe have trusted media for the information of the events taking place throughout the entire world for decades. Media people also know that people are fed up with their humdrum life and they are always seeking for something interesting and exciting to see and hear. Realizing the propensities of the general people, media people often dramatize the events in sensational ways to look real even they are not. Such market driven sensational journalism not only diminishes the trust of people on media, but also leads to some negative consequences. For instance, many models and celebrities have been defamed because of the public disclosure of their private photos and videos in a sensational way. We are well informed of the suicides committed by many celebrities because of the public disclosure of their sex tapes and videos. Similarly, public disclosure and dramatization of the Bill Clinton sex scandal has not only defamed him but also ended up his political career. Furthermore, dramatization and the exaggeration of the events by media has also a great role in fomenting social crisis such as, civil war, racial war, religious war and political conflicts. Thus, media highlights and dramatization of the events has an unfortunate consequences.
I believe that society would be better served if media focuses on those topics which have a lasting significance. Instead of highlighting sensational news, media should focus more on the topics related to different professions such as poultry, farming, culinary, travels and tours, agriculture and so forth. Society would be better served if the media provides sufficient information about the necessary techniques and the skills required to pursue these professions, and the viability of these professions at different places. Society would be better served if media encourage people to adopt these professions. This would help not only to reduce unemployment, but also uplift the economy of the nation.
Similarly, society would be better served if media focuses more on the programs related to environmental pollution, natural disasters, their causes and effects. People would be better served if media provides sufficient information about how environmental pollution leads to the rise of several diseases and several universal problems such as, global warming, ozone layer depletion and climate change. Society would be better served if media provides sufficient information about how to reduce such global effects. Similarly, society would be better served if media focuses more on the topics such as, landslides, flood, earthquake and hurricane like natural calamities. Numbers of life and huge amount of property in the underdeveloped countries would be saved if media provides sufficient information about the ways to mitigate the effects of such disasters.
In conclusion, I agree with the given assertion that society would be better served if media focuses on the events which could have a long lasting significance rather than highlight what is sensational at the moment.
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| 2021-05-05 | Sudan Devkota | 66 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sensational way" with adverb for "sensational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sure of their private photos and videos in a sensational way. We are well informed of the suicides c...
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Line 2, column 1291, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...zation of the events has an unfortunate consequences. I believe that society would be bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2992.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39099099099 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88403355414 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436036036036 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 950.4 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1367384345 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.086956522 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1304347826 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485776013313 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165347535194 0.0831039109588 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126251851744 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340420728995 0.150359130593 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120741589648 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.