Creating an appealing image has become more important in contemporary life than the reality or truth behind that image
The image of a person, firm or company is the primary concern of general public in contemporary life, and I believe that appealing image of a person, firm or company gives good impression to the general public which is imperative for their success in any realm of human endeavor. However, I believe that the reality behind the appealing image is also important to maintain ones success.
Appealing image of a person, firm or company gives good impression to the general public about themselves due to which they get public support which is important for their success. It is because of the same reason that companies, public figures, celebrities and the role models often discloses their appealing image to the general public through different social media. For instance, political leaders often discloses their appealing image to the general public by posting photos and videos of their works in favor of public interest such as, construction of the public schools, public hospitals, roads, and other developmental infrastructures. They also disclose the videos of their speech making promises to eradicate the prevailing social problems and crimes, and uplift the economic status of the people by providing employment to all the people. Public disclosure of these activities of the political leaders discloses their appealing image due to which they get public support which is important for them to gain and maintain their success.
Similarly, social workers, celebrities and different role models disclose their appealing image to gain popularity and to get success in their social and professional life. For instance, celebrities and role models manifest their appealing image to the general public by disclosing their participation in social programs such as, blood donation campaign, fund raising program, social awareness program, environment sanitation program and etc., through different social media. Similarly, these peoples also shares photos and videos in social media endowing themselves funds to old-aged home, orphanage, victims of disaster, public schools, or patients in hospital who are needy and helpless. Public disclosure of such generous activities helps them gain public support and popularity and become successful in their field of endeavor. Thus, creating an appealing image is important for ones success.
Similarly, different company discloses their appealing image by revealing the merits of their products through television, radio and social sites. Schools and colleges reveal their appealing images by disclosing wide range of curriculum, presence of reputed teachers, sports, sophisticated laboratories, and well organized libraries. All these activities in fact help these companies garner public support which is important for their progress and success.
However, the truth behind the appealing image is equally important as truth behind the mask cannot be always hidden. If the truth behind the appealing image is also appealing, it would be a great advantage. However, if the truth behind the image is different, it could have a dire consequence. For instance, G. Thapa was one of the most popular and charismatic political leader (health minister) of Nepal who have always discouraged corruption and advocated public welfare. He was so loved and admired by the people that people denied when he was indicted with malfeasance and corruption. As the media disclosed all the evidences against Thapa, he acknowledged the charge. This revelation of the truth led the ignominious end of his political career. Thus, the truth behind the appealing image is also equally important.
In sum, I agree that creating an appealing image is important for the success of people, firm or company; however, the truth behind the image is also equally important to maintain the success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3223.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 588.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48129251701 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77569933579 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.399659863946 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1008.9 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7233935837 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.92 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.52 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307342175642 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123932003502 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120041400518 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214378717654 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096014885841 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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