Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
University is usually known as a place where a student can seek higher knowledge and become an expert in the field they major in. However, it can also be a place that provides opportunities for students to experience and challenge themselves without any restrictions. Moving away from their parents and living off on their own in an environment they are not familiar with and having the pressure of attending to a prestigious university eliminated, students are given the chance to explore themselves in variety of aspects in the university they attend to.
Some may argue that since students chose to seek advanced education in what they major in, they should dig deeper into their area in universities and become an expert in the field. However, the society is no longer looking for someone who only excels in one part of the field. People who are known to be versatile are more preferred in many companies since many fields are being amalgamated. It is critical to be erudite in multiple fields. For instance, in the computer science field, those who expert in only one area of the programming field, such as, programming, web designing, and analyzing data, etc. are hired as software developers which are placed in the bottom level of a hierarchy. The next level are for those who have the ability to manage people who work in the bottom level of the hierarchy. To do so, they should be familiar with at least all the basic knowledge of each computer science related fields. Furthermore, those who are in the top level of the hierarchy, need to be experts in computer science and business. They should be capable of efficiently managing software development process and turn it into a profitable product.
In addition, it is highly important to take variety of courses outside of the student's field since having all such knowledge in various fields enhance the quality of their lives. Being smart in the field of economics can inhibit them from losing money or help them earn money in a legal way, and being smart in the field of psychology can help them socialize with others better. For example, a lot of tech companies are looking for computer engineers who also majored in finance and psychology because it is essential for CEOs to be erudite in various fields to be able to organize a company effectively. Furthermore, learning the courses in engineering may enable them to understand the fundamental factors in fixing machineries on their own. Of course, these do not require them to be an expert on every fields. However, having a bit of knowledge in variety of studies may be helpful.
To conclude, being familiar with the knowledge in multiple fields can augment the lives of the students and is actually quite essential nowadays. Due to the reasons above, universities should have the students to take various courses outside their field of study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ects in the university they attend to. Some may argue that since students chose...
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... university they attend to. Some may argue that since students chose to seek advan...
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...and turn it into a profitable product. In addition, it is highly important to t...
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...om losing money or help them earn money in a legal way, and being smart in the field of psycho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, look, may, so, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8950617284 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69976176925 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448559670782 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8776003521 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22894182996 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764611581385 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501745844271 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163816062965 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449919867421 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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