Unknown is necessary
From the ancient times human beings have tried to obtain information about all processes around and themselves as well. Such questions as: “What is the reason we came to this World”; “What will be with me in the future” warns almost every human kind. However, knowing too much information is dangerous and harmful enough. Hence, it can be inferred that unknown is not only necessary but also useful for bulk amount of reasons.
Firstly, lack of information is a great activator for people to live and go straight their dreams. The most important explanation of effectiveness of the unknown is possibility to dream and believe in own power. The best example of the use unknown is diagnose of some serious disease of the patient. Hence, doctors sometimes face the situation when person has barely got chances to survive. In this situation, if patient will be saturated with whole true but negative information about his or her impending death, will not have any motivations to go on living and fight the illness. Thus, having a lack of information, people tends to effectively impact on own life because of internal moral strength and belief in happy end.
Secondly, unknown is sufficient factor to foster the future generation effectively. Children are the most vulnerable part of a population being in a fragile state. Real word is quite challenging for kid’s understanding. Hence, bombarding a child with excessive details of information about events and processes around can damage the child’s morality and can negatively influence on his or her future. It is irrefutable that people, who are provided with too much information about sexual relationships in their childhood, hardly can have healthy psyche and are vulnerable to mental and sexual aberration.
Moreover, the lack of information is a very significant point for life to be interesting. Usually, people are more buoyant when they do not know the precise dates or facts from their future. For instance, it is undeniable fact that any human being will die some day, but since people know the exact date, they will definitely concentrate on this day. This, ultimately, will lead people to depressions and lost the chance to live happy life before the death. Thus, this example demonstrates the necessity of unknown in our lives.
Finally, unknown is not only way to hide some facts from people but also feasible to bring up creativity, talent and development of civilization. Thus, people try themselves in various spheres of life in order to find themselves as they do not know what they want or who they will be at the end. Thus, attempts of person to discover himself in different spheres will lead to development of all the nation not only one person only. The best example of inextricable link between unknown and the effective development is Columb’s discover of America. He desired to find a way to India so he went out to open sea for not known information. In result, Columb discovered America instead. However, would he obtain this if he had enough information about the way to India?
In conclusion, a life is a huge puzzle that people manage during their life period obtaining its meaning day-to-day. And who knows, maybe World is based on tremendous miracles that are hidden from our material understanding of issues. Hence, after we reveal these secretes and unknown information it will break like a house of cards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...en unknown and the effective development is Columb's discover of America. He...
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231950844854 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.138248847926 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0937019969278 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0721966205837 0.0497285424764 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112135176651 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0245775729647 0.0406280797675 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85698442409 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00307219662058 0.0016655270985 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.073732718894 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215053763441 0.0249443105267 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153609831029 0.0148568991511 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3440.0 2732.02544248 126% => OK
No of words: 566.0 452.878318584 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0777385159 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365724381625 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26148409894 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189045936396 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141342756184 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85698442409 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 219.290929204 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517667844523 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 64.1384657676 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6194690265 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8666666667 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2515649644 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.566666666667 0.674092028746 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 45.0150765607 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.42857142857 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170852276706 0.391690518653 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0684771581281 0.123202303941 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597152001919 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449653003953 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113228254981 0.149214159877 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065747543285 0.161403998019 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746718823363 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303322244662 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.076172291807 0.0692045440612 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119912259841 0.275328986314 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391015612666 0.0653680567796 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.4325221239 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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