The way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The way in which a a message is delivered is as important as the message itself. Whether or not the information contained in a message is important is irrelevent when one considered the various security and efficiency concerns surrounding the delivery of a missive to its intended reader. If a message takes too long to arrive at its desitnation, the value of the information diminishes in importance. Moreover, if a message is intercepted while en-route, the value of the letter would no longer hold value to its recipient. For these reasons, one must consider the way in which a message is delivered over the contents of said letter.
In 1964, durring the Cuban Missle Crisis, it was the secrecy of letter deliveries between the USA and Soviet Union that helped prevent atomic war. The Secrertry of State to president John Kennedy, in an attempt to defuse the nuclear standoff over the deployment of missles to the island of Cuba, secretly passed letters to the Soveits. While the content of these letters were crutial to the negotiations, if only one letter had been accidently distributed to the press, any chance of peace would have been lost. As such, the crisis illustrated how secrecy trumps content.
One must also consider the efficiency of information distribution. Following the introcution of the internet in the 21st century, widespread dissemination of information was made possible when never before was such a service accessable by so many people. The efficiency at which information can spread allowed for messages that could never have been sent to now be distributed around the world quickly. New types of messages can now be broadcast to the world that was not possible; blockchain technology, for example. allows for messages broadcasting financial transactons to be sent over the internet, which was not possible before the adoption of more efficient communciation methods.
However, one could cite the contents as the most important aspect of a message. Consider Martin Luther's theses, in which a monk challenged the conduct of the Catholic Church during the middle ages. The contents of Martin's writings challenged the very institution at the heart of European society, and conviced many to walk away from the ancient religous institution. The consequences of these actions sparked the Protestant Reformation and a subsequent war. However, one should consider the manner in which Martin's message was delivered to the masses: the printing press. Without an efficient means of communications, his messag would never have been adopted.
While the content of a message is important, the method in which thast letter is delivered is more important than the letter itself. Without an efficient means of delivery, important messages would not be able to be received. Without a method of ensuring the security of a message, the contents of a message could be distributed when such an action would destroy the secrets contained of said message.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
The way in which a a message is delivered is as important as...
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Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The way in which a a message is delivered is as important ...
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Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
The way in which a a message is delivered is as important as...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
... is as important as the message itself. Whether or not the information contained in a message ...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
... spread allowed for messages that could never have been sent to now be distributed around the w...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Allows
...le; blockchain technology, for example. allows for messages broadcasting financial tra...
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Line 7, column 636, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
...ans of communications, his messag would never have been adopted. While the content of a mess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2493.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19375 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90783708159 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470833333333 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9760035869 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.391304348 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8695652174 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4347826087 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193018268332 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713870406054 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924160850595 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115750478513 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726954458954 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.