We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own

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We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own

In the world all the people have their own point of view. some people have similar point of view, while some have contradicting point of view. The common people have point of view that is influenced by some celebrities or any person who is greatly admired among the people. The issue states that people are bound to learn more from the people who have similar point of view rather than from someone who have contradicting point of view. I disagree with this issue.

Firstly, most of the people do not have their own independent point of view. Their point of view is under strong influence of the people who are great achievers of various fields in which the respective person is interested. these people, who adheres the achievers, tend to follow every move of their ‘idols’. The people often try to be like their idol by copying their style. these people likely to agree the view point of their idol. For example, if celebrities tries a new hair style, their fans likely to adhere them by imitating their hair style.

Moreover, most of the people are very stubborn when it comes to sharing view. when people meet others who have contradicting view, they will try to patronize the person with contradicting view. There are very less people in the world who will listen to the person who have contradicting view. Even if when the people get a wrong advice from the people who have similar view, they will not listen to others view and madly follow the wrong advice. For example, Terrorists are brain washed by their superiors. they do not try to understand others view of point. they follow their superiors’ commands without any question.

however, by listening to contradicting point of views, people can learn more. they can learn from the contradicting view by viewing situations from different perspective. people are mostly provincial when it comes to their view. they do not try to see situations from different perspective and different angle. The contradicting view can show them other side of the situations. they can learn all pros and cons of their view. Therefore, having a debate to someone who has contradicting view will teach someone more. For example, when politicians have debate on the same topic on which their view belies, they can understand the whole view of the situation.

To sum up this, listening to a contradicting view is great eye opener. however in the case of most people, they are likely to adhere someone who shares same point of view. they are passive to the view that contradicts their own view. Due to this, people are likely to learn more from the people who have same view than someone who have contradicting view.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88209606987 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60524910444 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366812227074 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5602939995 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.5333333333 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76666666667 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3612133257 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143611789759 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100397914276 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269064435877 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843382753748 0.0667264976115 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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