"We can usually learn much from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own. "; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."
As learning has always been a gradual process in the course of time, a creation of a new idea is only possible when there is a certain amount of contradicting in the views we give and the views other have on a particular topic like us. Although a certain level of disagreement may cause stress in the first level, it would be beneficial for the development of an issue in the long run. The given topic might be highly contentious but, personally I believe that I'm not consonant to the first half of the topic while I'm somewhat consonant in the second half.
ideas are generally enhanced and found to be much more productive when it undergoes a series of debates and arguments. For supporting examples one needs to look no further than a television set. A huge amount of television shows, especially talk shows, have been incorporating such debate that has created a solution for the various issues regarding the society. regardless of the topic, such debate has aroused a general idea of all the problems and its solution from each and every aspect; thus, regarded as an part of one's development.
every year United Nations calls for an annual meeting to all its delegates, member countries, to discuss the common world issues including all developed and indigent countries. With even such a huge gap between their economies, all the nations discover a common ground that not only benefits a particular geographical area but the entire globe in a holistic way. regardless of any major issues, still countries like the USA and North Korea are still trying to solve various issues by the means of debate. The shreds of evidence of the Cuban missile crisis and the Hiroshima bomb blast gave a view of the consequences that occur under lack of debate or argument.
some people argue that disagreement causes a lot of stress in a person which eventually inhibits learning. This has caused many people to back off from their plans and projects; leading to a greater loss. but looking at world history, it has always been discovered that a certain impact of the debate has created the most innovative invention that has changed the overview of the world we live today. The greatest theories of all time – theory of relativity by Einstein, Newton's law of motions- are all the outcomes of heated debate and contrastive opinion.
As said "only with a strike of 2 rocks, created the fire", hence for any situation a common solution and innovate an idea can be generated with the debate among the countries or organizations or an individual of contradictory opinions. In summary, it is somewhat true that disagreement can cause a heated debate; however, the ones who can actually debate on a particular issue are the ones that are to be called as 'innovators'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, look, may, regarding, second, so, still, thus, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86919831224 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73987935517 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533755274262 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8028770918 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.764705882 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8823529412 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133272213537 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439627646774 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538909928965 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715139486463 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421762192952 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.