We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
Every individual has his own ups and downs. We are defined by both our successes and failures.Each of us succeed and fail in their own way.The way we deal with a particular situation helps in developing our personality.I agree with the author when he states that a person learns most valuable lessons in life from struggling with his/her limitations as opposed to enjoying their successes because I believe that there is more to learn from situations which do not favor us rather than the ones that do.
Firstly,as said before every person defines his failure/struggle and success according to his own understanding.The way a person handles a tough situation helps him find the path to success faster than someone who cannot cope with it.The definition of failure/success depends on the ambition of the person to some extent.For instance, if we consider GRE , every person giving GRE might think of a score which is suitable for them to secure admissions for further studies. Now if a person aims for a score of 310 as opposed to a person who aims for 330, getting a 310 will be considered success for one and failure for another .The person who aims for 330 will considered to give the exam again learning from his failures in contrast to the person who is satiated with a score of 310.In both cases it is the ambition that drives one to reappear for the exam and other to not do so.
Secondly,business is one of such fields where success is ephemeral.Success in all factors of business generally do not last for a longer run. So in order to succeed in business one has to learn to deal with failures.For instance, if the owner of a certain establishment ,does not see the growth of his business as he had envisioned he would further go into depression as he would view this as a constant failure in business and might shut it down eventually. This might be true for some cases but not all , there are situations where people faced failure in the beginning and then rose to great heights. For instance, Colonel Sanders the founder of KFC started his business at the age where most of us consider retirement and today KFC is one of the biggest fast food chains in the world. The point being one should never lose hope and constantly try and achieve the goal which they aspire.
However, it is not failure that always drives us to succeed.Success can also act as a positive reinforcement to build better things in the coming future.As success tells us that we are proceeding in the right direction and gives us the audacity of experimenting things in the market which we never thought before.For instance , Amazon founded by Jeff Bezos was a Book selling website in its rudimentary stage.When that website got a hit , Jeff thought of expanding his company to sell other products as well. Today he is the richest man on the planet and his company is one of the top technological companies in the world which sells almost anything and everything.If Amazon had not succeeded as a book selling website we might had not witnessed this behemoth of a company which we see today.
In conclusion, success and failure and two sides of the same coin. It depends on the individual how he/she handles success and failure.A person might get depressed on facing failures , similarly a person who has achieved success might be satiated with it and get stagnated.However a person might overcome his failure and achieve his goal , similary a person who has achieved his goal might think of achieving something even bigger. Valuable lessons can be learnt in both success and struggles as this depends on a person’s perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3006.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 626.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80191693291 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00199880112 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85439354154 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458466453674 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.859211363 60.3974514979 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.714285714 118.986275619 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.7142857143 23.4991977007 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19758121823 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691784525096 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117656074709 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135094307405 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155386530482 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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