The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
The author contends that the well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. I agree with the writer's assertion. For the improvement of the society, questions to the authority plays a huge role.
Admittedly, when many people question to the authority, it certainly force the policy makers to make changes. For supporting example, in Nepal, many people questioned about the ubiquitous corruption to the authority, later the government made strict rules in order to mitigate the corruption. For some time later, it significantly reduced the corruption level. If many people were not questioned the authority, this terrible condition of corruption could have not ameliorated.
In addition, when many people question to the authority, it often compel authority to make better policies. We can see that in underdeveloped countries, very less people question to the authority, however in first world counties this is quite opposite. Consequently, the first world countries progress rapidly while the third world countries can not improved significantly. For example, in Africa, the human rights laws are rarely changes since very less number of people question to the authority.
Further, in Kathmandu Nepal, few years back, the water was of very low quality, however later people gathered and question to the authority, then later government improved the quality of water considerably. This proves that, questioning to the authority is crucial for improving the well- being of the society.
In conclusion, it is very imperative to question the authority if the society wants to be improved.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...le question authority. I agree with the writers assertion. For the improvement of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forces'?
Suggestion: forces
...question to the authority, it certainly force the policy makers to make changes. For ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o mitigate the corruption. For some time later, it significantly reduced the corr...
^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compels'?
Suggestion: compels
...ple question to the authority, it often compel authority to make better policies. We c...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... that in underdeveloped countries, very less people question to the authority, howev...
^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...while the third world countries can not improved significantly. For example, in Africa,...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, then, third, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 252.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95918953788 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4256772388 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450055065643 0.243740707755 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180728830061 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208045494707 0.0758088955206 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289153063016 0.150359130593 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159874201983 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...le question authority. I agree with the writers assertion. For the improvement of the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forces'?
Suggestion: forces
...question to the authority, it certainly force the policy makers to make changes. For ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o mitigate the corruption. For some time later, it significantly reduced the corr...
^^
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compels'?
Suggestion: compels
...ple question to the authority, it often compel authority to make better policies. We c...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... that in underdeveloped countries, very less people question to the authority, howev...
^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...while the third world countries can not improved significantly. For example, in Africa,...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, then, third, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 252.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95918953788 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4256772388 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450055065643 0.243740707755 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180728830061 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208045494707 0.0758088955206 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289153063016 0.150359130593 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159874201983 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.