The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The people with the authority control the well –fare of a society. They are provided with necessary funds by the government so that it is made sure that the society is provided with all its needs. Hence it is the right of a citizen belonging to a particular community to question the authority for its needs.
It is only when the people in charge are questioned that they come into senses and due to the fear of being culpable do what is necessary for the well-being of the community. Many officials tend to misuse the authority that is been given to them for personal benefits while placing the benefits of the society at stake. It can be seen in underdeveloped countries free health care, education and several other facilities are not provided to its immediate community. This mere negligence,for which the authority has to be blamed, caused the society to be prone to many health issues and majority of that community being uneducated. In fact, the authorities sometimes even overshadow this for other trivial matters.
Although the authority has to be questioned for the society to get what It needs it is not always recommended to do so. This can cause the government to be reluctant due to continuous force and eventually can end up in the authorities being corrupt. Persistent badger can cause can lose of interest and determination to work for the well-being of the society.
The society as a group can raise concerns or file a request in an official manner. The authority must ensure the concern is looked into and an appropriate solution been provided that benefits the well-being of a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...society is provided with all its needs. Hence it is the right of a citizen belonging ...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...mmediate community. This mere negligence,for which the authority has to be blamed, c...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended doing'.
Suggestion: recommended doing
...y to get what It needs it is not always recommended to do so. This can cause the government to be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224489795918 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.187074829932 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0850340136054 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0272108843537 0.0497285424764 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408163265306 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122448979592 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0612244897959 0.0406280797675 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82943642091 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0510204081633 0.030933414821 165% => OK
Particles: 0.00340136054422 0.0016655270985 204% => OK
Determiners: 0.136054421769 0.0997080785238 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170068027211 0.0148568991511 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1616.0 2732.02544248 59% => OK
No of words: 276.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85507246377 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275362318841 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221014492754 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144927536232 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82943642091 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 219.290929204 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485507246377 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 46.4715426353 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2307692308 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6758197472 59.4972553346 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 48.7670011148 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497078131184 0.391690518653 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161364323571 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0817955644106 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632098894475 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12616676448 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251805836251 0.161403998019 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950809867067 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.48479579444 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122496801712 0.0692045440612 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372110224816 0.275328986314 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435428018013 0.0653680567796 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.