When demands are placed on a person, the leader in them emerges.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There are variety of person are avaliable, and according to there behaviour, style, attitudes the nature may vary from person to person. The given statement suggest that When demand are placed on a person, the leader in them emerges. I partially agree with given statement. In considering leader ship, it again vary person to person there past experiences. so it might not always hold true that when demand are placed then the leadership in them emerges.
There are three types of person, one who has experience and are very well known how to tackle the situation. Internal ability may encourage him to work as leader. because of earlier experience and hadling situation he may have fruitful output. In bachelors program, an project guide divided an work to individual according to there ability. In this case, among all the group one who lead the team have taken responsiblity to survive with success of fail of an project. The leader ship not becasue of fear of getting less mark, its an demand of project guide to surve an rank 1 among all the project. It's leader leadership who may turned his project, to final destiny with in success.
In organisation, if an employee really work hard day and night. he had not got chance to prove his ability, his briliantness, confidence. Each and every time may lagg becaus some reason, but when absence of his boss he really work hard because of as his boss demand to complete certain work within days and made presentation for same, so leader ship may emerges in him.
In an opposite case, person who really fearless, not involved in activity where leader ship, infact one who far away from leadership quality. Even though, if boss alloted an regular work, he may not complete certain work within same time duration period. Reason behind for this might be different lazyness, inability. There are two reason on either he may too much lazy, or he may laaging completeing the work because of some other reason. If Person lazy it may affect in some worse manner to him, image infront of boss may reduce.
In my accordance when demands placed on person then person might take an advantages because some one have demanding you to complete task. Just for sake of doing an work, the leader has not meaning. Instead one actively involve for doing any task, so he may grow forward in his life.
In an concluding section, it's accptable fact that when demand are placed on person, the leader in them emerges, but it's after all person to person, there attitude, style, behaviour. Because, leader ship is one quality one can apply not only in there working field but also in society demand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'varies'?
Suggestion: varies
...t. In considering leader ship, it again vary person to person there past experiences...
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...ty may encourage him to work as leader. because of earlier experience and hadling situa...
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... fruitful output. In bachelors program, an project guide divided an work to indivi...
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...elors program, an project guide divided an work to individual according to there a...
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...ccording to there ability. In this case, among all the group one who lead the tea...
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...lity to survive with success of fail of an project. The leader ship not becasue of...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...casue of fear of getting less mark, its an demand of project guide to surve an ran...
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...p quality. Even though, if boss alloted an regular work, he may not complete certa...
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Suggestion: an advantage; advantages
...placed on person then person might take an advantages because some one have demanding you to ...
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...person might take an advantages because some one have demanding you to complete task. Ju...
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...o complete task. Just for sake of doing an work, the leader has not meaning. Inste...
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Suggestion: Instead,
...ng an work, the leader has not meaning. Instead one actively involve for doing any task...
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... he may grow forward in his life. In an concluding section, its accptable fact ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rking field but also in society demand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79340659341 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41034280661 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503296703297 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3218779825 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.24 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.12 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171323722346 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586953038996 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605490938649 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110250719114 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630431960367 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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