Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
There is no doubt that overdependence on technology in current times has proved to be more
detrimental to humans than beneficial.
Today we live in an age of technology where technological gadgets are abounding. With access to a plethora of modern age technological gadgets such as mobile phones, tablets, computers and other technological gadgets, the dependence on such gadgets has definitely been high in the current times. While there is a heavy dependence on technology in the current times, I disagree with the given statement and profer that such dependence on technology has proved to be more beneficial than detrimental.
gadgets like mobile phones allow us to solve a multitude of varied problems. mobile phones have GPS inbuilt in them allowing humans to navigate their own way independently to their desitnations. mobile phones have inbuilt calculators that prevent human errors during calculations and at times prevent avoidable losses. mobile applications showing the time of arrival of bus at different location, solving such a large number of problems with a small device not only saves time but alos leaves a person free to solve other problems that he may be interested in.
Furthermore, technology has also solved the problem of communicating over vast distances. Video calling has allowed almost face to face communication to our loved ones who may live in a different country, thereby reducing the distances between family members living far apart. Moreover, a student in any country gets access to quality education over the internet with just a few clicks of a button. The alleviation of the problem of communicating with a mentor or a teacher over large distances helps students grow their knowledge , ultimately partially solving the problem of education in places without good local education.
Lastly , solving such everyday problems via technology itself requires creatiity and critical thinking. mobile applications, websites, laptops and computers all have their own set of interesting problems to be solved. Since such devices are at the forefront of their fields , solving problems in these devices requires creativity and critical thinking, ultimately building an acumen for problem solving.
For the above reasons, I believe that the high devependence on technology in current times proves to be more beneficial than detrimental. technology will not only pave way for a better future, but also help us live better and enriched lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Mobile
...o solve a multitude of varied problems. mobile phones have GPS inbuilt in them allowin...
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Suggestion: Mobile
... and at times prevent avoidable losses. mobile applications showing the time of arriva...
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...blems that he may be interested in. Furthermore, technology has also solved ...
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Suggestion: ,
...nces helps students grow their knowledge , ultimately partially solving the proble...
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...laces without good local education. Lastly , solving such everyday problems ...
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...od local education. Lastly , solving such everyday problems via tech...
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Suggestion: Mobile
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...ding an acumen for problem solving. For the above reasons, I believe that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46448087432 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95431488499 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554644808743 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6731645587 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0339233105436 0.243740707755 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123538717406 0.0831039109588 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154814408717 0.0758088955206 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.020793191947 0.150359130593 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116678809493 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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