Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Setting up of a goal helps people to focus on the target and prevents from deviating outside of the path of success. Therefore, young ones should be provided with incentives to pursue the goals. The prompt above suggests that young ones should be convinced to pursue the long-lasting goal rather than the transient recognition. In my opinion, I am strongly consonant with the statement because of the following main reasons.
In today’s society, we can find people trying to gain sudden popularity and avoiding the activities involved to gain long term benefit. This not only affects the person trying to find the fugitive success but also the society and country as a whole. For instance, tiktok is getting popular day by day in the world; people are risking their life to make videos and to gain followers. As a result, about 30 people died last year (2022); risking the life for such immediate fame is futile. Therefore, they need incentives to pursue long-term goals.
People should pursue goals that can give both satisfaction and good salary to them in the future. Young people are like the clay that can be shaped in different forms, this is why, incentives are of prior importance for them as they lack proper critical thinking capacity at such early age. With such motivations, they can be shaped into various skilled manpower-like engineers, doctors, astronauts, etc.-which are of great use for community, nation and world as a whole. By this, they can get required fame in their related field for long-term.
This is the world of competition, one can get famous only by persistent, assiduous effort to accomplish the task; for such effort, they should seek goals that are not only realistic, but also of their prime concern. One can’t achieve the eminence of his success if he lacks the willingness to accomplish the same. So, the young need the proper exhaustive information and incentive to make a long-term goal and proceed towards it effectively.
In sum, the search for the immediate and sudden fame and recognition is pointless; it not only consumes time and effort but also hampers the growth of the nation as mentioned above. Therefore, the adults should be provided with the required encouragements at the right time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98933333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67804771346 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5748433227 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258700437837 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833359141126 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479877498446 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143281625918 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432548098874 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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