Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The vastness of the universe is imponderable; what we know today is the drop of what we don’t. Of course, we have come to the present world with much development and research in every field, but in some cases the further we try understand the meaning, more bewildered we become. Although, in most of the cases, the scientific discoveries have made our conception clear, in some fields, it has made more complex than previous.
Firstly, we can look around us; the wonder of the scientific discoveries; from the deep ocean to the high above the sky we can swiftly travel across from one part of the earth to another. Also, the luxury we have today is incomparable to the situation and lifestlyle of the past. The understanding level of human in each field have been soared due to the advancement of the knowledge as a result of scientific discoveries. For instance, at early stages we were unknown of the phenomena of rain and truly believed the rain was due to the god’s mercy; but at present, we know the theory behind the rain- evaporation and condensation- and also accurately predict the event. We clearly, have the better understanding in this field.
Not only in the meterological studies, but also we have propelled ourselves in various fields: like medical, engineering, chemical, etc. These discoveries have made it possible which we could hardly imagine in the past. Now, we can not only cure disease but also genetically modify the DNAs as we need. These sophisticated understanding in the field have made us capable to mutate the plants and animals and produce variety of new species. In this regard, scientific discoveries have made our understanding much clearer.
However, in some fields, the scientific discoveries have complicated the understanding of the humans. The creation of the humans and this world still intrigues the scientists. Although in the past it was believed to be the creation of the god, but the present world is stunned by the process of evolution. Various theory have been propounded like big bang regarding the topic but we are still uncertain about the formation of the planets, stars, galaxies, etc. It still puzzles whether there are any other alien species or we are the only one.
In sum, the scientific discoveries have made our knowledge broad in most of the fields but in some fields it has made more complex as mentioned above.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y in the meterological studies, but also we have propelled ourselves in various f...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, for instance, of course, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82719689047 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493796526055 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3797647236 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298264448134 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947255703051 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451491901037 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167688401041 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312608610746 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y in the meterological studies, but also we have propelled ourselves in various f...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, for instance, of course, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82719689047 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493796526055 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3797647236 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.684210526 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298264448134 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947255703051 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451491901037 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167688401041 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312608610746 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.