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Changes which happened because of Vietnam war from this picture below.
The Vietnam War greatly changed America forever. It was the longest war fought in America’s history, around 19th century. There was a war in Vietnam between America and Vietnamese rebellion. Their war was uproar across the country, causing countless victims between them. Most of Americans were soldiers, so they already knew what was gone happen in a war, but in Vietnam. Most of them were civilian, farmers to be good. War has reached their village and burned by either Americans or their own kin. Then most of survivors started fleeing to the city which would provide them their need, they hoped...
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Sentence: But the local people didn't reject their hospitality even if they came from the country which invade them.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace invade with verb, past tense
Sentence: Because of that, many people began to get use to spoke English with the missionaries and then they used English among them self.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1415 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.748 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.253 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.252 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.238 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
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