the diagram shows the reason people in vietnam move to other country.

Essay topics:

the diagram shows the reason people in vietnam move to other country.

The flowchart illustrates the various steps of reasons why Vietnamese move to the America.The whole cause was due to the Vietnam’s war.

First of all, when the war in Vietnam occurred, the city has become disorganized anymore. It was crowded, unpleasant place for living, and a lot of issue happened. At the same time, the level of criminal act rapidly rose. Then, the village actually damaged and also there was no hope for safety living there. Certainly, it created an awful situation and if they continued to live in that country, they might be endanger.

Finally, Vietnamese took a solution that they have to move to other countries if they want to survive. However, the country actually has different languages as theirs where they liked to move. As a consequence, they need to learn that language. Vietnamese have chosen America where they favored to move. The America national language is English and they have to learn this language.

In short, When english language learning is completed, the Vietnamese could move to the America.

Votes
Average: 6 (2 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

Sentence: The America national language is English and they have to learn this language.
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to America and national

why Vietnamese move to the America.
why Vietnameses move to America.

It was crowded, unpleasant place for living
It was a crowded, unpleasant place for living

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.905 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 174 200
No. of Characters: 838 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.816 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.48 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.905 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.573 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.057 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4