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Public places are noisy. What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it?
With the rapid rate of population growth, we face different types of problems such as shortness in natural resources, pollution and the noise. In modern life, noise seems to become a serious problem specially in big cities and in public places. There are some main causes for this issue.
First of all, the high number of people who get together in public places is the main reason for making noise. Although these individuals aren’t related to each other, the combination of them make a big noise. Besides, the machines such as elevators, escalators, cash machines and etc. are other sources fo...
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Sentence: It may be consider that there is no serious drawback about noisy places but noise can cause significant unbeneficial effects on our life such as stress, headaches and anxiety.
Description: The fragment be consider that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace consider with adjective
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