Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
Nowadays, many people have a job. Job becomes trend in the world. In the past, job in the world was simple and had a little competition, because there was a few job. Job depends on our skill and our study that we have. Several people think that learning at university or college can make us easy to get a bright career future. While some people agree with this statement, there are some opinions say to get success, people should not continue study. There are two ways to get the bright career. It is to get a job and continue study.
Firstly, several people usually choose to start work straight after school to get earning money immediately. For example, my cousin, after he had graduated from senior high school, he directly looked for a job because he wanted to help his family to survive their life. Earning money for some people will make to save their life. Earning money is very important for some of people. Secondly, people believe that when we work, we can get experience and skill. For example, people that work as a mechanic in a company as soon as possible become a best mechanic in that company. They believe that if they have a job in a long time will make them success in their job and get bright career. Experience and skill with job are always togetherness.
On other hand, people believe that when we continue our study until higher school, we will get good influence in our career, because many jobs need academic qualification requirements. For example, for people who want to enter in a big company like BUMN and Pertamina, they usually give a standard academic qualification. Academic qualification for some companies is a condition. So, academic qualification is needed to get a great job. Also, job market becomes trend presently, because many people want to obtain high position in their company. For example, bachelor in major electronic and fresh graduate from senior high school in major electronic too, they want to enter in a company with same position. A company, usually prefer a bachelor than a fresh graduate from high school. Job market is used for some people who become the best worker in a company. Job market becomes competitive for each employee to get a success.
Ultimately, to get a good job, it depends on yourself, your mind, and your skill. You can continue study in university or not to get success, it is your choice.
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