Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?
In many countries today, many talent shows appearing in our television program. They are finding talented people to become famous person. However, some talent shows jut get benefit from the people to increase their rating for entertainment. I think, the talent shows is the best way to find talented people and make them popular in their country.
The people must have talent to show the judges in talent shows. If they do not have any talent, they could not join the selection. For example, American Got Talent, that is allowing many people or citizen in America to join the selection and show the...
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