You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir,
To the Editor
I am becoming a person belong to our local community for a long time and a recommendation is written by me in order to society for one of our five district dining establishments, The Long Star Cafe.
Many great qualities in there that struck me enter the place, such as the room style and the atmosphere. I feel comfortable with the laid back attitude of the place. I never forget about the size and quality of the portions. It is very appreciable.
The service that you assimilate, and with the emphasize quantity of dishes served. I suggest for you to come in that place. When I visited, I ordered a steak of mammoth proportions and giant fresh as main course, crisp vegetables salad as appetizer and as dessert, I adopt Black Forest. That is all luscious food with a reasonable price.
I expected many costumer will often to come in for dinner after reading my writing – Bon appetite
Yours truly
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I am becoming a person belong to our local community
I am becoming a person who belongs to our local community
in order to society
in order to + do something.
Sentence: The service that you assimilate, and with the emphasize quantity of dishes served.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to the and emphasize
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 709 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.487 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.464 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.606 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4