You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there. Describe what you saw and offer to take your friend there.
Dear Logitra,
I hope that you find my letter in good health. I would like to tell you about my vacation with my family in the last holiday. We have just come back from France. There, we visited appreciable mountain which name Parlemen which located in French Alps. To go to the climb, we only drove half way up, and continued to the long uphill by walking boots, because the road was abandon in the middle of the mountain.
The road was currently took us a while to finish the mountain but it was best worth exertion, albeit it at the starting. The scenery was flimsy when we reached in the mountaintop. The town and the lake were seen by me in right side. In the left side, the snow covered peaks of Mont Blanc was extremely exciting.
Just for detail, we often spend our time when holiday to travel to France and we are aiming for trip next time, we are burning to appropriate you there. The views will make you are simply breathtaking and you will enjoy the climb particularly you walk to get to the top of the mountain.
Hopefully, you can replay my letter as soon as possible.
we visited appreciable mountain which name Parlemen which located in French Alps.
we visited a appreciable mountain with the name Parlemen which is located in French Alps.
Sentence: To go to the climb, we only drove half way up, and continued to the long uphill by walking boots, because the road was abandon in the middle of the mountain.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to was and abandon
The views will make you are simply breathtaking
The views will make you simply breathtaking
you will enjoy the climb particularly you walk to get to the top of the mountain.
you will enjoy the climb particularly when you walk to get to the top of the mountain.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 200 200
No. of Characters: 844 1000
No. of Different Words: 127 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.761 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.22 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.182 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.835 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.083 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.567 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.24 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4